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Someone is always hurting you
No matter how good you are to them
You never get what you deserve
Try to change but it still doesn't help
You are stuck in this awful situation
Don't bother because you will end up with a broken heart
Happy endings are far from happy
Smiles turn to frowns
Drowning in emotions
That are heartfelt
Everyone feels pity towards you
Well they can take their pity
And bring it upon themselves
Because pity only brings more pain
Don't pity me I won't pity you
They deserve better than you [comments] => 7 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 48 [informant] => UnlovedChild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Someone Is Always Hurting You

Contributed by UnlovedChild on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:46:05 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Who can you trust anymore
Someone is always hurting you
No matter how good you are to them
You never get what you deserve
Try to change but it still doesn't help
You are stuck in this awful situation
Don't bother because you will end up with a broken heart
Happy endings are far from happy
Smiles turn to frowns
Drowning in emotions
That are heartfelt
Everyone feels pity towards you
Well they can take their pity
And bring it upon themselves
Because pity only brings more pain
Don't pity me I won't pity you
They deserve better than you

Copyright © UnlovedChild ... [ 2005-02-12 03:46:05]
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Re: Someone Is Always Hurting You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:50:59 AM AEST
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I often feel this way. Wonderful write.

Re: Someone Is Always Hurting You (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 05:13:58 AM AEST
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I guess it is the way of life.
great job on the poem.

Re: Someone Is Always Hurting You (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 09:53:05 AM AEST
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Amy this was an incredible write, i really enjoyed this sad poem. Keep writing.

Jane x

Re: Someone Is Always Hurting You (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleeding_Nightmares on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:36:13 AM AEST
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Such depth and captured sorrow, excellent poem

Re: Someone Is Always Hurting You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 07:35:58 PM AEST
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you said it

Re: Someone Is Always Hurting You (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:14:26 PM AEST
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Good write Amy. Sad, but good. Thanks for sharing.

Re: Someone Is Always Hurting You (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:51:56 PM AEST
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i loved the ending. deserve, interesting concept that is. i loved this piece. its my second favorite by you. keep up the excellent work, my friend.

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