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knowing that death is soon to be my fate
I'm lost without my soul
trying not to lose control
I am torn without ny heart
because they took it out and ripped it apart

I am alone

I'm dead in my dreams
and no one can hear my screams
I've fallen into the dark
and it has left it's mark
I don't know to get out
no one will come that I don't doubt

I am alone

I try to find the light
not willing to give up the fight
I know I can make it some how
and I'm going to do it now
Wait who will be wating for me
no one as it always seems to be

I am alone

So I stand here on the edge
knowing I'm about to leap of this edge
I'm taking it all
and making the fall
Now I'm gone
and I don't know why I waited so long

Because.....

i am still alone [comments] => 5 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 13 [informant] => heartbroken4ever [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

I am Alone

Contributed by heartbroken4ever on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:47:07 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm trapped in a world of hate
knowing that death is soon to be my fate
I'm lost without my soul
trying not to lose control
I am torn without ny heart
because they took it out and ripped it apart

I am alone

I'm dead in my dreams
and no one can hear my screams
I've fallen into the dark
and it has left it's mark
I don't know to get out
no one will come that I don't doubt

I am alone

I try to find the light
not willing to give up the fight
I know I can make it some how
and I'm going to do it now
Wait who will be wating for me
no one as it always seems to be

I am alone

So I stand here on the edge
knowing I'm about to leap of this edge
I'm taking it all
and making the fall
Now I'm gone
and I don't know why I waited so long

Because.....

i am still alone

Copyright © heartbroken4ever ... [ 2005-02-11 19:47:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I am Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:52:50 PM AEST
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"I don't know to get out
no one will come that I don't doubt"
Ok then who Am I....... ? :)

Clark

Re: I am Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:52:55 PM AEST
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Wow...heart-wrenching pain emits from every line. I know the pain in this poem VERY well but could never express it like this. Wow...words can't discribe the beauty and pain in this poem. Wow.
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You say you read me like an open book. But the pages are torn and frayed.
-Tsubaki

Re: I am Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:03:34 PM AEST
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good poem amber. im very impressed.

Re: I am Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by ArseCrust on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 07:05:55 AM AEST
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this is a really good poem.and just remember you wont always alone.

Re: I am Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleeding_Nightmares on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:28:01 AM AEST
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So much sorrow, vividly described emotions and details, excellent poem.

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