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Array ( [sid] => 84015 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bide My Time [time] => 2005-02-11 18:08:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I've lost everything
That ever ment anything
~
I'll try to bide my time
Before I take whats left,
Thats mine
~
Everything is crumbling
My life is dwindleing
~
I'll try to bide my time
Before I erase whats left,
Thats kind
~
My life is ceasing
I am always grieving
~
I'll try to bide my time
Before I end whats left
Thats still in line
~
My time is sifting
My life is drifting
~
To hell with my time
It's an unhill battle
I drop the life,
Thats mine
~
With this gun's
Rattle...

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 36 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Bide My Time

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 06:08:16 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I've lost everything
That ever ment anything
~
I'll try to bide my time
Before I take whats left,
Thats mine
~
Everything is crumbling
My life is dwindleing
~
I'll try to bide my time
Before I erase whats left,
Thats kind
~
My life is ceasing
I am always grieving
~
I'll try to bide my time
Before I end whats left
Thats still in line
~
My time is sifting
My life is drifting
~
To hell with my time
It's an unhill battle
I drop the life,
Thats mine
~
With this gun's
Rattle...

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-11 18:08:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Bide My Time (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:51:16 PM AEST
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There were just a few typos..But with you I will overlook that.The piece overall was very good and even though I am not a huge fan of suicide poems this was one of the better one's out there...

Re: Bide My Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:08:35 PM AEST
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another kurt cobain...wonderful poem, but like amber, i would just bring you back to life and kill you again, and then youd wish that you had done it a more artistic way the first time!

Re: Bide My Time (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:49:55 PM AEST
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((please don't kill yourself!! I've posted it before and I'll post it again as many times as needed)) as for your poem, I don't think it was one of your bests but I liked it all the same. I like your structure, nice write.

--amanda--

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