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Array ( [sid] => 83954 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => sun come to me [time] => 2005-02-11 10:13:53 [hometext] => I know,I know This Guys Off The Hook [bodytext] => Sun come to me
Bring me your warmth your light your protection
Tis the dawning of a new day the begining of a new life
the start of a wonderful new world
and with hope and desire I welcome thee
I ask for good fortune and happiness for all who begin this jorney with me
that we all end In the same adjusted and completed way

Thy sun Is upon me
It rides high In the sky It shines bright In my eyes
tis mid day and she glows above me bending her rays to surround me
the fluid drains from my body and I wonder now If my waking thoughts
were my best thoughts today
and my mind now drifts towards the setting of this sun
when I can ponder this day and what I have done

Sun leave my sight dissapear from my viewand run from the approaching darkness
but I i shall remain I shall stay
I shall await Its comming again tomorrow
and I shall protect you until she rises once more

T.S.W. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 43 [informant] => tsw [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

sun come to me

Contributed by tsw on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 10:13:53 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Sun come to me
Bring me your warmth your light your protection
Tis the dawning of a new day the begining of a new life
the start of a wonderful new world
and with hope and desire I welcome thee
I ask for good fortune and happiness for all who begin this jorney with me
that we all end In the same adjusted and completed way

Thy sun Is upon me
It rides high In the sky It shines bright In my eyes
tis mid day and she glows above me bending her rays to surround me
the fluid drains from my body and I wonder now If my waking thoughts
were my best thoughts today
and my mind now drifts towards the setting of this sun
when I can ponder this day and what I have done

Sun leave my sight dissapear from my viewand run from the approaching darkness
but I i shall remain I shall stay
I shall await Its comming again tomorrow
and I shall protect you until she rises once more

T.S.W.

Copyright © tsw ... [ 2005-02-11 10:13:53]
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Re: sun come to me (User Rating: 1 )
by speed-of-sound on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 07:52:40 AM AEST
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i really like this. some emotion came out of me when i read this. very nice. it seems to show so many deep thoughts at once. lovely :)

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