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Array ( [sid] => 83934 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Misson Complete [time] => 2005-02-11 04:47:18 [hometext] => For those who make life so hard to live... [bodytext] => How much more can I take of you trying to tear me to shreds? The harsh words you speak; like misery without end...

What have I done to you to make you hate me? Most my life dedicated to making your life comfy...

How much more can I take before it's enough? Destroy every part of me; break me down I'm not too tough...

Would you like to watch me bleed? For you I'll slice and cut; just watch and see...

Will you take my body down once it's hung for you? Finally satisfied; work way overdue...

From you, will there be a single tear to fall? Let it drip; it's over I'm gone you don't have to stand so tall...

Now stick me in a box and throw me down a pit...your mission's complete...ended all with one last spit!

Dedicated to my family...
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Misson Complete

Contributed by only4das on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 04:47:18 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



How much more can I take of you trying to tear me to shreds? The harsh words you speak; like misery without end...

What have I done to you to make you hate me? Most my life dedicated to making your life comfy...

How much more can I take before it's enough? Destroy every part of me; break me down I'm not too tough...

Would you like to watch me bleed? For you I'll slice and cut; just watch and see...

Will you take my body down once it's hung for you? Finally satisfied; work way overdue...

From you, will there be a single tear to fall? Let it drip; it's over I'm gone you don't have to stand so tall...

Now stick me in a box and throw me down a pit...your mission's complete...ended all with one last spit!

Dedicated to my family...




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Re: Misson Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleeding_Nightmares on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 05:00:47 AM AEST
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Hardcore and sad, lots of raw feeling, excellent poem


Re: Misson Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 05:38:47 AM AEST
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very sad.


Re: Misson Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by potlicker on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 06:03:19 AM AEST
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I sincerly hope that this is just a poem, life with your family can be difficult at times, especially when you feel unloved, but there is always a way out besides this


Re: Misson Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by zaknafein8891 on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 08:07:53 AM AEST
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so much emotion. great poem.


Re: Misson Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by fuzzywuzzy on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:07:21 AM AEST
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this is kind of a mixed metaphor..are you going to cut and bleed or hang..or both? I guess you can do both..hang first and then cut..but cut before the knot is real snug?...???




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