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Array ( [sid] => 83929 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The First [time] => 2005-02-11 03:48:55 [hometext] => This is true love [bodytext] => I love your blue eyes
I love waking next to you
We are so young, but love is true

I love your sweet smile & the way you make me laugh
I love everything about you

You make me smile hard
I want you with me
I want you here
I miss your body
Wrapped around mine

If I had one wish
It would be to be with you
I love everything about you
You are mine to be

If i had you now
I would hug you so tight
I miss you & your touch
Please hug me tonight [comments] => 4 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 2 [informant] => mia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
The First

Contributed by mia on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 03:48:55 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I love your blue eyes
I love waking next to you
We are so young, but love is true

I love your sweet smile & the way you make me laugh
I love everything about you

You make me smile hard
I want you with me
I want you here
I miss your body
Wrapped around mine

If I had one wish
It would be to be with you
I love everything about you
You are mine to be

If i had you now
I would hug you so tight
I miss you & your touch
Please hug me tonight




Copyright © mia ... [ 2005-02-11 03:48:55]
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Re: The First (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 04:27:47 AM AEST
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aww how sweet.


Re: The First (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleeding_Nightmares on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 04:30:54 AM AEST
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Sweet words. tender and real, deep and passionate poem.


Re: The First (User Rating: 1 )
by bruised_angel on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 05:35:10 AM AEST
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cool


Re: The First (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 10:08:41 AM AEST
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once again the heart gently speaks,

a splendid peice of writting . . .


Dorian Chambers




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