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Array ( [sid] => 83924 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Way You Make Me Feel [time] => 2005-02-11 02:57:01 [hometext] => Something I definitely needed get off my chest...I'm not sure if this is done yet, but plz comment, I just spilled my heart out, and it hurts! (I don't like the last line) [bodytext] => I thought I reached a heart break’s core
But the pain I’m feeling is like never before
I don’t understand how this can be
Because you weren’t even ever with me
But mentally and emotionally we’re so there
Being only friends is something I can’t bare
Why can’t you feel the way I feel?
But I guess that was never part of the deal
There are so many things that remind me of you
I’m at a point where I don’t know what to do
Again I find myself crying every night
My heart and mind do nothing but fight
No matter the situation my heart prevails
Because it’s you I don’t ever want to fail
But I’m so confused and don’t know too much
Except that I’m dying waiting for your touch
I wish I was stronger and not so weak
Because if I was we wouldn’t even speak
Wait, we did try that once before
And that’s when my heart felt like it actually tore
I have, never, ever, felt like this
But being with you is complete and utter bliss
Sometimes I wish it was you I never met
But I know that’s something I’d definitely regret
There are a few words I want to say to you
You’ve got me at the point where I just hate you
Who’s gonna mend my broken heart?
Oh damn, this is the worst part
What if my heart never heals?
Why was it MY heart you had to steal?
This is definitely an experience I’ll always remember
Especially during the month of September
No matter the circumstance I’ll always be here for you
Oh and by the way, I do love you
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The Way You Make Me Feel

Contributed by o7neves on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 02:57:01 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



I thought I reached a heart break’s core
But the pain I’m feeling is like never before
I don’t understand how this can be
Because you weren’t even ever with me
But mentally and emotionally we’re so there
Being only friends is something I can’t bare
Why can’t you feel the way I feel?
But I guess that was never part of the deal
There are so many things that remind me of you
I’m at a point where I don’t know what to do
Again I find myself crying every night
My heart and mind do nothing but fight
No matter the situation my heart prevails
Because it’s you I don’t ever want to fail
But I’m so confused and don’t know too much
Except that I’m dying waiting for your touch
I wish I was stronger and not so weak
Because if I was we wouldn’t even speak
Wait, we did try that once before
And that’s when my heart felt like it actually tore
I have, never, ever, felt like this
But being with you is complete and utter bliss
Sometimes I wish it was you I never met
But I know that’s something I’d definitely regret
There are a few words I want to say to you
You’ve got me at the point where I just hate you
Who’s gonna mend my broken heart?
Oh damn, this is the worst part
What if my heart never heals?
Why was it MY heart you had to steal?
This is definitely an experience I’ll always remember
Especially during the month of September
No matter the circumstance I’ll always be here for you
Oh and by the way, I do love you




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Re: The Way You Make Me Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by sleeplessmind on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 03:03:51 AM AEST
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You want a comment....

Well this poem is wonderfuly written. Its absolutely amazing. You take each section into the this now then that which is what keeps it flowing so easily. Then you add...my heart and mind do nothing but fight, which I thought was a wonderful way of saying I do but I dont.
Two thumbs up to you!


Re: The Way You Make Me Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 03:06:51 AM AEST
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it truely amaze me how you put your heart into these words.awsome


Re: The Way You Make Me Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 04:05:34 AM AEST
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Very well written! Great write!


Re: The Way You Make Me Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:13:25 PM AEST
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Excelent poem. I hope that things will get better for you. You seem so hurt, I hope your heart mends.

Scott


Re: The Way You Make Me Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Dec2three198five on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:30:48 AM AEST
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I love how you got out everything you feel. I don't think you left a single feeling out. I love this poem also because I'm feeling that 100% also. I Love It. 33


Re: The Way You Make Me Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:12:39 AM AEST
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the fact that i know what's all behind this makes even more powerful... i thought you did a wonderful job portraying your feelings towards this person, it was a perfect word painting, absolutely no flaws what so ever, great job tanya!!!




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