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White Walls
Contributed by
Red_October
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:52:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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The typical white walls
are always there
are temporary change
but somehow still the same
I wait
365 days
I stay
but then I go away
to a new place
with the typical white walls
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Re: White Walls
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by Phantomdream on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:55:35 PM AEST
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| I like this...but i wasn't quite interpreting it as having a bad day. I was thinking....along the lines of a day where you just feel completely out of your mind. |
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Re: White Walls
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by jjones12 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 09:11:19 PM AEST
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Great Write!
=Jen=
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Re: White Walls
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by Kuro_Mirai on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 10:21:21 PM AEST
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| Interesting. I like it. |
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Re: White Walls
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:44:27 AM AEST
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"are temporary change"
Surroundings often reflect our mood. Your white walls seem to me to be indicative of fatigue . . . with what, is anyone's guess.
Worth reading, Tiffany J. |
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Re: White Walls
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by Stitch on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:32:52 AM AEST
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Hmmm, reminds me of several apartments I lived in, but white walls could stand for so many things and their timelessness means much too. An interesting write that leaves me wanting to know more.
Stitch |
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