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As tears gently roll down my pillow,
They fall onto my soft bed covers,
I long to feel the arms of my lover.

I envy the lovely beautiful rose,
I remember when I was one of those,
But as heartache set in my petals fell,
My lovely flower lost its heavenly smell.

I stand with my head hung in the soil,
Thinking of the love that I did spoil,
Why couldn’t I love, why didn’t I trust?
It was my own fault my relationships gone bust.

My petals were once so vibrant & red,
Now they are brown & a long time dead,
They hang down over my face,
Suspended alone in an unhappy place.

I can remember the smiles, the happiness,
But I’ve been suffocated by the hurt & the stress,
The tears won’t ever stop falling,
But to my heart you have stopped calling.

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Weeping Willow

Contributed by pixie on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:03:08 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I feel just like a weeping willow,
As tears gently roll down my pillow,
They fall onto my soft bed covers,
I long to feel the arms of my lover.

I envy the lovely beautiful rose,
I remember when I was one of those,
But as heartache set in my petals fell,
My lovely flower lost its heavenly smell.

I stand with my head hung in the soil,
Thinking of the love that I did spoil,
Why couldn’t I love, why didn’t I trust?
It was my own fault my relationships gone bust.

My petals were once so vibrant & red,
Now they are brown & a long time dead,
They hang down over my face,
Suspended alone in an unhappy place.

I can remember the smiles, the happiness,
But I’ve been suffocated by the hurt & the stress,
The tears won’t ever stop falling,
But to my heart you have stopped calling.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-02-10 20:03:08]
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Re: Weeping Willow (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:09:05 PM AEST
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Wow Pixie ... that one hurts ... I can feel that all the way over here. You certainly know how express the feeling, and fear of aloneness. And you do so very well.

Nazzy ~

Re: Weeping Willow (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:15:01 PM AEST
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You never have to prove yourself to anyone..Not when it comes to your talent here..I really love all your feeling you put into your writes..This is no exception at all..

Re: Weeping Willow (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:19:02 PM AEST
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awwww pixilator....

Re: Weeping Willow (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:44:41 PM AEST
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this tells of love as as sadly as one could tell about it, and just as beautiful pix, another one one 4 the art gallery . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Weeping Willow (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 09:16:01 PM AEST
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beautifully sad, pixie - i just hate that i can relate, to the love lost never going back sort of feeling. tiffany j.

Re: Weeping Willow (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 03:17:04 PM AEST
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Well the feelings were well writen, powerful emotions are always strong in your poetry. A griping sad write Kriss.

Jane x

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