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Array ( [sid] => 83840 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => On my knees crying [time] => 2005-02-10 17:20:13 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm on my knees
Alone and crying
I made her mad now again I'm alone
Everything I said made it worse
My heart is broken and we didn't even try too hard
She was my hope, my power
I walked again for her
Walked away from my wheel chair
Without her I'll just give up
Once again I'll plant my *** in the chair
I have no motive now
Nothing to look forward to
She made me happy gave me the power to get up and walk
I fell in love gave me reason to try
For her I am walking
For her I'll try to get as good as I can
But with you being mad at me I think that there is nothing worth trying for
But I still love you
I'll try to hold the tears
Just for you [comments] => 1 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 2 [informant] => stonedraider23 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

On my knees crying

Contributed by stonedraider23 on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:20:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I'm on my knees
Alone and crying
I made her mad now again I'm alone
Everything I said made it worse
My heart is broken and we didn't even try too hard
She was my hope, my power
I walked again for her
Walked away from my wheel chair
Without her I'll just give up
Once again I'll plant my *** in the chair
I have no motive now
Nothing to look forward to
She made me happy gave me the power to get up and walk
I fell in love gave me reason to try
For her I am walking
For her I'll try to get as good as I can
But with you being mad at me I think that there is nothing worth trying for
But I still love you
I'll try to hold the tears
Just for you

Copyright © stonedraider23 ... [ 2005-02-10 17:20:13]
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Re: On my knees crying (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 06:24:01 PM AEST
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hon, first off very nice write. Secondly don't give up on the desire to walk, if you walked once for her, you can walk for yourself as well.
You do have a motive it is for yourself.

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