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Array ( [sid] => 83740 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Paper Thin Walls [time] => 2005-02-09 21:42:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A father and a daughter fight about mistakes,
and how each one is filled up with even more hate.

Now that she knows the truth and he's let it all out,
they can begin their silence, they no longer have to shout.

The girl crushed by her father's harsh words,
that make her sink lower, that make her hurt.

Sits in her room hoping to God that she dies,
talks to her boyfriend, on the inside she cries.

How is it that no one can see her sorrow,
how she now wishes not to see tomorrow?

How is it that all the fights and all the brawls,
were left unseen behind paper thin walls? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 32 [informant] => allforyou [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Paper Thin Walls

Contributed by allforyou on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:42:44 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

A father and a daughter fight about mistakes,
and how each one is filled up with even more hate.

Now that she knows the truth and he's let it all out,
they can begin their silence, they no longer have to shout.

The girl crushed by her father's harsh words,
that make her sink lower, that make her hurt.

Sits in her room hoping to God that she dies,
talks to her boyfriend, on the inside she cries.

How is it that no one can see her sorrow,
how she now wishes not to see tomorrow?

How is it that all the fights and all the brawls,
were left unseen behind paper thin walls?

Copyright © allforyou ... [ 2005-02-09 21:42:44]
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Re: Paper Thin Walls (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:00:12 PM AEST
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this is a very good poem: good rhyme scheme, filled with emotion, and straight from the heart. i would give constructive critisism but there is none needed here. Great write :-D

~Brenna~

Re: Paper Thin Walls (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:08:06 PM AEST
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Very sad but enlightening. It's written really well.
thanks 4 sharing.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy

Re: Paper Thin Walls (User Rating: 1 )
by i_heart_herby on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 03:53:22 PM AEST
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This was a cool poem. I can relate.

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