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The mirror twists reflections
And wrong impressions

You are seen
As you want to be
Nonexistent

Perfection is refracted
And misconception is contracted

I'm blinded unable to see
What the mirror has twisted
In my appearance

Because I see with my mind's eye
And perspective can be contradicted

The truth is never seen
It's believed by the ignorant

But what you see are the lies
And all of your pathetic tries
Twisted to what you want them to be
Never again seen

But because of that fact
Perfection is never refracted
As blood seeps through the cracks

Of the shattered reflection
But correct impression [comments] => 6 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 13 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Refraction of Blood

Contributed by essentially9 on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:09:01 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Refraction of Blood

The mirror twists reflections
And wrong impressions

You are seen
As you want to be
Nonexistent

Perfection is refracted
And misconception is contracted

I'm blinded unable to see
What the mirror has twisted
In my appearance

Because I see with my mind's eye
And perspective can be contradicted

The truth is never seen
It's believed by the ignorant

But what you see are the lies
And all of your pathetic tries
Twisted to what you want them to be
Never again seen

But because of that fact
Perfection is never refracted
As blood seeps through the cracks

Of the shattered reflection
But correct impression

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-02-09 21:09:01]
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Re: Refraction of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:12:42 PM AEST
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You and I both like wriitng about mirrors I think..This was very good and the overall feel was so great to get into..Your one of the best kitten..There is very few that can compete here at all..

Re: Refraction of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Compton-tre-block on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:24:50 PM AEST
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LOVED IT..
GRUESOME,TUNG TWISTIN,AND WEIRD

Re: Refraction of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Compton-tre-block on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:24:52 PM AEST
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LOVED IT..
GRUESOME,TUNG TWISTIN,AND WEIRD

Re: Refraction of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:37:10 PM AEST
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Well Patricks got It right..
Cause i know I can't compeat
Your great Jinnifer

Clark

Re: Refraction of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:01:30 PM AEST
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I loved this write,damn girl,you're good!!

Re: Refraction of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:37:23 PM AEST
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This was an exciting, heart-wrenching poem. Felt twisted by the words. Good job!

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