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In this point of time
Whether I should smile or cry…..
Maybe because deep down
I still wish you were mine

But then it hits me
You’re with her tonight
I can’t help but feel the stab of hurt
Or the way it shatters my being
I don’t feel alright

You were the first boy
I ever felt comfortable with
You were honestly something special
If you had me always
There’s nothing I wouldn’t give

Before I could know though
You turned your back towards me
Left me floating in the wind
I’m sure you weren’t that blind
You’re wrong you could see

Now you are leaving
I’m so unsure of what to feel
Would it be right to say goodbye?
Do you deserve that final word?
All I know is the inner damage is real

I SHOULD smile
Because you’re moving away
I will try with everything I know
To smile instead of cry
But will I still feel empty
At the end of the day?....
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Smile....or Cry

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:23:16 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Why am I not certain
In this point of time
Whether I should smile or cry…..
Maybe because deep down
I still wish you were mine

But then it hits me
You’re with her tonight
I can’t help but feel the stab of hurt
Or the way it shatters my being
I don’t feel alright

You were the first boy
I ever felt comfortable with
You were honestly something special
If you had me always
There’s nothing I wouldn’t give

Before I could know though
You turned your back towards me
Left me floating in the wind
I’m sure you weren’t that blind
You’re wrong you could see

Now you are leaving
I’m so unsure of what to feel
Would it be right to say goodbye?
Do you deserve that final word?
All I know is the inner damage is real

I SHOULD smile
Because you’re moving away
I will try with everything I know
To smile instead of cry
But will I still feel empty
At the end of the day?....

Copyright Â© pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-02-09 20:23:16]
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Re: Smile....or Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by heartbroken4ever on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:33:42 PM AEST
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Life always has me confused but
i like the poem i think it great

Amber

Re: Smile....or Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by XxCrYiNg4YoUxX on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:33:21 PM AEST
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This poem is great...it really means alot ot me becasue of the fact i know how much of a hell one guy can put you through...I look at it like this if a guy does everything he can to hurt you he's not worth your time..

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