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See, what you did to me?
You constantly broke my heart.
I was constantly falling apart.
Things have changed now.
I learned that with a little help from friends and family, I can move on somehow.
Instead of spending my nights crying thinking of our time together, I still cherrish the memories but look forward to making memories with a new guy.
I will not sit here and lie, saying I am strong because it still hurts and at times I still want to cry.
I tell myself that this is Gods way of saying it is not ment to be.
There is someone out there for me I just have yet to find or to see.
I am starting to enjoy the first time things, like kissing a guy you like for the first time and going on dates.
I thought my chance of finding and having a nice, caring guy were over but I discovered it is not to late.
When we broke up I thought my life would end but as it turns out, it only just begun. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 48 [informant] => matts_sweetie_04 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Untitled

Contributed by matts_sweetie_04 on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 07:44:51 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Cant you see?
See, what you did to me?
You constantly broke my heart.
I was constantly falling apart.
Things have changed now.
I learned that with a little help from friends and family, I can move on somehow.
Instead of spending my nights crying thinking of our time together, I still cherrish the memories but look forward to making memories with a new guy.
I will not sit here and lie, saying I am strong because it still hurts and at times I still want to cry.
I tell myself that this is Gods way of saying it is not ment to be.
There is someone out there for me I just have yet to find or to see.
I am starting to enjoy the first time things, like kissing a guy you like for the first time and going on dates.
I thought my chance of finding and having a nice, caring guy were over but I discovered it is not to late.
When we broke up I thought my life would end but as it turns out, it only just begun.

Copyright © matts_sweetie_04 ... [ 2005-02-09 19:44:51]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by heartbroken4ever on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:10:31 PM AEST
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I like the poem it really touched me
I have a few sugestions on a tile
one is Since you've been gone or Look at me now or moving on . well thats all for now

lots of love
amber

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