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My Window
Contributed by
JPA
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Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 06:20:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You
touched my soul
like dew touches
my window
making small, small
drops of water
running down
and off.
A dafodill
so small and pure,
innocent, but wild
dripping wet
from the drops
for dew that touched
my window
Copyright ©
JPA
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2005-02-09 18:20:39]
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Re: My Window
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by heartbroken4ever on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 06:23:02 PM AEST
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I like this
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Re: My Window
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by wolfman on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 06:41:06 PM AEST
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True, this is short but full of feelings and it shows. it does hurt to loss some one you love weather it be family, friend, or significant other, loss is loss. and all we can do is try and move on with what we have left, be strong and God bless.
*welcome to YPDC you are always welcom in our globel family.* This was a very good poem for its size. I did like it, I do hope you enjoy your time here and may it be productive and peaceful.
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Re: My Window
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 09:45:52 PM AEST
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| Good write. Lovely images. |
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