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A short poem
Contributed by
zenmind
on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 05:04:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Stranded,
a fairy dust team
sparkles translated elms on
the dreary rocks we call
California.
Dreaming of eternity's promise
to bless the meek, we stand,
stranded,
together,
still,
watching the rocks falter.
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zenmind
... [
2005-02-09 17:04:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A short poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by FleurdeSang on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 05:16:47 PM AEST (User
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Zenmind......I....wow.
Genius, sheer brilliance right here!! Perfect in every way!! Short, yet compelling and ever captivating... Another flawless piece to add to your endless collection, dearest Zenmind... Always nice to try new things! And this suits you well, my friend! Excellent!! I could go on forever on how lovely this is! Beautiful in its profoundity... I love it! Love all your poetry! More more more!! All my love, cheri! Forever,
Your friend and avid fan,
Stephy! *Fleur* |
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Re: A short poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 05:35:52 PM AEST (User
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I know it left a wonderful image in my minds eye. Thankyou for sharing. Much peace to you. Laura |
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Re: A short poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by Accusurfer on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:20:56 PM AEST (User
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You're right. It does sound like a photograph. Keith |
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