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But didn’t look any deeper, because I figured you had ties
We exchanged a few words, but with no such flirting
By the end of the night I was crying, so didn’t even think about courting
After that night you, weren’t even a thought in my mind
Up until two weeks later, when I saw you for the second time
I reconsidered the idea of flirting
Especially once you caught me smirking
I wasn’t aware, of the effect you had on me
But you knew it all too well, cuz you wouldn’t let me be
So you finally introduced yourself and shook my hand
Now that I think about it a date with you is something I want to land
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don't have a title

Contributed by o7neves on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 11:59:44 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

When I first saw you, I saw your beautiful blue eyes
But didn’t look any deeper, because I figured you had ties
We exchanged a few words, but with no such flirting
By the end of the night I was crying, so didn’t even think about courting
After that night you, weren’t even a thought in my mind
Up until two weeks later, when I saw you for the second time
I reconsidered the idea of flirting
Especially once you caught me smirking
I wasn’t aware, of the effect you had on me
But you knew it all too well, cuz you wouldn’t let me be
So you finally introduced yourself and shook my hand
Now that I think about it a date with you is something I want to land

Copyright Â© o7neves ... [ 2005-02-08 23:59:44]
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Re: don't have a title (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 03:16:30 PM AEST
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verry honest and open, cute poem, hey, u never know . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: don't have a title (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 04:07:54 AM AEST
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This is a cute write. I enjoyed it. I can relate :-)

Re: don't have a title (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:17:51 PM AEST
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This is so sweet.

Scott

Re: don't have a title (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:16:25 AM AEST
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great job again tanya!! I know this was awhile ago so how did things ever turn out with this guy?? with as much as we talk there's still some things i still don't know :) keep em comin...

Curtis

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