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Array ( [sid] => 83565 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my fantasy [time] => 2005-02-08 21:27:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => MY *FANTASY* HAS TURNED TO MADNESS. ALL MY *GOODNESS*HAS TURNED TO BADNESS. MY NEED TO HAVE *YOU* HAS TAKEN MY SOUL. MY *HEART* IS TREMBLING--- I*VE JUST LOST CONTROL.....

I cry for the time that U were almost mine, I cry 4 the memories I've left behind, I cry for the pain, the lost, the old the new, I cry for the times I thought I had you

Wanting him is hard to get. Loving him is hard to regret. Losing him is hard to accept. But with all the hurt I've felt, letting go is the most painful yet.

"TrUe LoVe WiLL NeVeR Be ExPLaInEd" ThAt'S HoW I kNoW I'm In LoVe

*WhEn TiMeS ArE HaRd aLL I dO Is CLoSe My EyEs AnD ThInK oF YoU*

FrUsTrAtEd CuZ I CaN*t TeLL If It*S ReAL
MaD CuZ I DoN*t nO HoW u FeEL
UpSeT CuZ We CaN*t MaKe iT RiTe
SaD KuZ I NeEd U DaY & NiTe
AnGrY CuZ U WoNt TaKe My HaNd
AgGriVaTeD CuZ U DoN*t UnDeRsTaNd
DiSsApOiNtEd CuZ We CaN*t B 2GeThA [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 40 [informant] => XxCrYiNg4YoUxX [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

my fantasy

Contributed by XxCrYiNg4YoUxX on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 09:27:15 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

MY *FANTASY* HAS TURNED TO MADNESS. ALL MY *GOODNESS*HAS TURNED TO BADNESS. MY NEED TO HAVE *YOU* HAS TAKEN MY SOUL. MY *HEART* IS TREMBLING--- I*VE JUST LOST CONTROL.....

I cry for the time that U were almost mine, I cry 4 the memories I've left behind, I cry for the pain, the lost, the old the new, I cry for the times I thought I had you

Wanting him is hard to get. Loving him is hard to regret. Losing him is hard to accept. But with all the hurt I've felt, letting go is the most painful yet.

"TrUe LoVe WiLL NeVeR Be ExPLaInEd" ThAt'S HoW I kNoW I'm In LoVe

*WhEn TiMeS ArE HaRd aLL I dO Is CLoSe My EyEs AnD ThInK oF YoU*

FrUsTrAtEd CuZ I CaN*t TeLL If It*S ReAL
MaD CuZ I DoN*t nO HoW u FeEL
UpSeT CuZ We CaN*t MaKe iT RiTe
SaD KuZ I NeEd U DaY & NiTe
AnGrY CuZ U WoNt TaKe My HaNd
AgGriVaTeD CuZ U DoN*t UnDeRsTaNd
DiSsApOiNtEd CuZ We CaN*t B 2GeThA

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Re: my fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 11:14:23 PM AEST
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Well - this is good if you take the time to look past the extra doo-hickeys and
spelling. I think you really put something interesting into this.
The 2nd an 3rd stanzas I really liked - they were good.

~Waos/Kara

Re: my fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 01:28:17 AM AEST
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NOW THAT'S A REALLY COOL WAY YOU WROTE THIS,LETTERS & ALL!SOUNDS LIKE YOU GOT A LITTLE HEART FILLED WITH SOME BIG TIME KIND OF LOVE!!

DAN!!!

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