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so why should I care
Would they be happy if I died
I bet they wouldn't even cry.
There's many ways to die
Which way should I try.

I could use a knife
to take my life
or maybe a gun
that would be fun
or what about a noose
I'll ned one thats not loose.

I think I know now
Want to know how?
I'll let you choose
pick the you want me to use.
Do you want me do it real fast or nice and slow
hurry choose so I can go.

I'm in hell
and its not hard to tell.
I wonder if they know I'm dead
and are memories running through their heads.
Are they wishing I was alive
and never took that dive.

Well their the ones to blame
ain't that a shame.
I told them to becareful what they wish for
or someone will be dead on the floor.

Now look what happened I took my life
and they lost a mother, a daughter, and a wife.

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Gone

Contributed by heartbroken4ever on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:55:51 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

They don't want me here
so why should I care
Would they be happy if I died
I bet they wouldn't even cry.
There's many ways to die
Which way should I try.

I could use a knife
to take my life
or maybe a gun
that would be fun
or what about a noose
I'll ned one thats not loose.

I think I know now
Want to know how?
I'll let you choose
pick the you want me to use.
Do you want me do it real fast or nice and slow
hurry choose so I can go.

I'm in hell
and its not hard to tell.
I wonder if they know I'm dead
and are memories running through their heads.
Are they wishing I was alive
and never took that dive.

Well their the ones to blame
ain't that a shame.
I told them to becareful what they wish for
or someone will be dead on the floor.

Now look what happened I took my life
and they lost a mother, a daughter, and a wife.

Copyright © heartbroken4ever ... [ 2005-02-08 19:55:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:59:14 PM AEST
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Amber Amber Amber...You surprise me girl..Damn.. and you said you didnt like my dark suicidal poems....;)

Clark

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Crimson_Valley on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:35:01 PM AEST
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That is so sad! It really got to me. Suicide is very sad, I don't want anyone to die.

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:46:30 PM AEST
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wow!! that is a great poem!
The subject is serious but i feel
the emotion in it.
-Jen

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Mandy2007 on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:02:55 PM AEST
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WOW! impressive! Ya know, peopel think that since suicide is such an important topic, no one could turn it into an interseting poem, but you did the rhymeing thing and it turned out excellent! check out soem of mine if ya want.

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