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I am lost
Forever Forgotten
At my own cost

Withhold
I am nothing
Forever Forgiving
At my own loss

Blindfold
I am alone
Forever Forsaken
Nailed to this cross

Untold
I am a story
Forever Forging
A past so blurry

Beautiful begining without a happy
Ending

A fragile life
Broken to pieces
Out of too much strife
His life ceases....

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 36 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Forever

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 06:13:28 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Behold
I am lost
Forever Forgotten
At my own cost

Withhold
I am nothing
Forever Forgiving
At my own loss

Blindfold
I am alone
Forever Forsaken
Nailed to this cross

Untold
I am a story
Forever Forging
A past so blurry

Beautiful begining without a happy
Ending

A fragile life
Broken to pieces
Out of too much strife
His life ceases....

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-08 18:13:28]
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Re: Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 06:49:05 PM AEST
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Though I do tend to avoid suicide poetry, I found this beautiful, and quite well-written and styled.

May your road rise up.

Andrew

Re: Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:13:43 PM AEST
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hmmm good write dont have many suicide writes but yea this one didnt seem like a suicide write but i dunno keep it up

Re: Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:56:35 PM AEST
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spendid indeedy. i noticed your format before your beautiful beginning without a happy ending part. though i dont know why you didnt formulate the second line for all of them with a rhyme, you did so with sentence structure though. ::shrugs:: im a rhyme freak, i easily detect rhyme schemes, lol. but i like your poem. very well written, thought of, and expressed. and guess what this is better tahn 75 percent of the sites posting. what a surprise, not. =]

Re: Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by _smelly_oranges_ on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:59:03 AM AEST
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this is wonderful piece

Re: Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:02:24 PM AEST
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not one of your best, but all in all a splendid write. Don't be so hard on yourself you are a fabulous writer, absolutely fantastic, very talented. Keep it up, I want to see more of your writes.

ly,
--amanda--

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