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Sunset shone its magnifigant beauty
Hand in hand, together we kiss slowly
The world falling apart around us
How we got here, no one knows

We met in darkness, surrounded by hate and pain
We fought through the thorns, tearing at us
We didnt know eachother existedTorn in two with the birth of out soul

We fought alone, cold, lightning and darkness forever covers the sky
Always so dark, running from out demons
We meet eachother on the brink of suicide

Ce connected so closely, so fast as fate was made and fullfilled
The dark skys cleared, then finally the sun shone
Our true selves came about the hidden pain, making it end
Finally complete as our two souls become one again
Now forever we will be together alone in out fairytale ending
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Field Of Roses

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 04:49:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

We walk alone in the field of roses
Sunset shone its magnifigant beauty
Hand in hand, together we kiss slowly
The world falling apart around us
How we got here, no one knows

We met in darkness, surrounded by hate and pain
We fought through the thorns, tearing at us
We didnt know eachother existedTorn in two with the birth of out soul

We fought alone, cold, lightning and darkness forever covers the sky
Always so dark, running from out demons
We meet eachother on the brink of suicide

Ce connected so closely, so fast as fate was made and fullfilled
The dark skys cleared, then finally the sun shone
Our true selves came about the hidden pain, making it end
Finally complete as our two souls become one again
Now forever we will be together alone in out fairytale ending

Copyright © willow_tara72002 ... [ 2005-02-08 16:49:16]
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Re: Field Of Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:14:21 PM AEST
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wounderfully written!

Re: Field Of Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:49:45 PM AEST
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great write. The imagery is gorgeous and I love the concept of love's trials being like a field of roses

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