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[sid] => 83518
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => my moment.
[time] => 2005-02-08 16:39:09
[hometext] => please comment on this, as well as my other poems.. I could use some feedback.
[bodytext] => Wandering through the dark ness of my life, I never stopped to look around and think. I only wondered why. Why was this happening? Who could I be? Yet I never looked outside of me. I stumbled, I fell, I ruined myself. I fought, and I swore that there were no doors of Opportunity waiting for me. But that one moment; I looked up and saw that You had always been there. You had cared. You had loved. You sacrificed yourself. This.. All for me. And this.. this is what true love is. No family, no friend, no man, can care for you like Him. They will all let you down: but there is a Friend that sticks closer than a brother. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 11 [informant] => _myonlyone_ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )
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