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And tries to hide her tears
Watching people walk on by
Confirming her worst fears

Loneliness consumes her
She aches to just belong
Find someone who will love her
Help save her from alone

But her heart she hides within
Not ready to emerge
An angel who’s forgotten
And lost within her world

She lives her life for others
Helping those she can
Hoping that against all odds
Her dreams will soon begin
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Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams

Contributed by dawny on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:11:18 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

She hides within a heart of gold
And tries to hide her tears
Watching people walk on by
Confirming her worst fears

Loneliness consumes her
She aches to just belong
Find someone who will love her
Help save her from alone

But her heart she hides within
Not ready to emerge
An angel who’s forgotten
And lost within her world

She lives her life for others
Helping those she can
Hoping that against all odds
Her dreams will soon begin

Copyright Â© dawny ... [ 2005-02-08 07:11:18]
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Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:21:18 AM AEST
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I have missed your poetry. This was very enjoyable. Sad, but sweet, and ending with such hope.
Stitch

Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:32:08 AM AEST
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I have also missed your poems Dawny, I loved this one, it was so well written
pix xx *hugs*

Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:34:40 AM AEST
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You and me both, dawny.

Spike

Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:27:29 AM AEST
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It’s so good to see you back Dawny, this was so well written. I can relate to it very much. All the sadness and emotions you’ve poured here was really outstanding. Brilliant ending as well

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by craz2 on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:28:23 AM AEST
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really good. i enjoyed this. sometimes we tend to do more fro all around us. then our own dreams get put off. a

Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 09:23:19 AM AEST
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Anoyher expressive write. Good words. Blessings.

Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 02:09:29 AM AEST
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Great write. I really enjoyed reading this piece. :-)

Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 04:17:54 PM AEST
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Great write Dawny,

This could easily be written by me, exactly how I feel most of the time, hopefully my dreams will become real soon!

Love Ali xxxxx

Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 07:46:10 AM AEST
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I think of hope as a lasso that tries to rope our dreams. Sometimes it takes a while but hope is the key.

I loved your poem and the meaning.

It just shined.

Kie

Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by took3nails on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:14:26 AM AEST
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Your a great writer, Why are there only two poems.

Re: Lost In Hope, Found In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 01:42:11 PM AEST
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Aww, Im love this piece Dawn.
I hate to say it, but I relate to it, too.
Especially that last stanza.
This is a gorgeous write my friend, though it somehow makes me sad.

*hugs tons*
Phil xxx

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