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Array ( [sid] => 83452 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreamweaver's Garden [time] => 2005-02-08 00:24:11 [hometext] => a window to my soul.... [bodytext] => In this empty room
A perished fire still can burn
I sit and still play this lovely tune
To rise above this harmful burden

We play our songs ever so sweetly
Yet the monster of the past will not sleep
Ensnared in the shadows of the moon
I dream near a life of warmth one step too far

We run away from this darker side
Still hoping the morning will shine
Golden rays unwind a story
As I lay in the dreamweaver’s garden of fantasy

We play our songs ever so sweetly
Yet the monster of the past will not sleep
Ensnared in the shadows of the moon
I dream near a life of warmth one step too far

Keep me here in this flower’s field
Where the world’s rivers wont flow on me
O dreamweaver hold me in your tears
I can’t live forever in your false tales of reverie

We play our songs ever so sweetly
Yet the monster of the past will not sleep
Ensnared in the shadows of the moon
I dream near a life of warmth one step too far
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Dreamweaver's Garden

Contributed by Soulless on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 12:24:11 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



In this empty room
A perished fire still can burn
I sit and still play this lovely tune
To rise above this harmful burden

We play our songs ever so sweetly
Yet the monster of the past will not sleep
Ensnared in the shadows of the moon
I dream near a life of warmth one step too far

We run away from this darker side
Still hoping the morning will shine
Golden rays unwind a story
As I lay in the dreamweaver’s garden of fantasy

We play our songs ever so sweetly
Yet the monster of the past will not sleep
Ensnared in the shadows of the moon
I dream near a life of warmth one step too far

Keep me here in this flower’s field
Where the world’s rivers wont flow on me
O dreamweaver hold me in your tears
I can’t live forever in your false tales of reverie

We play our songs ever so sweetly
Yet the monster of the past will not sleep
Ensnared in the shadows of the moon
I dream near a life of warmth one step too far




Copyright © Soulless ... [ 2005-02-08 00:24:11]
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Re: Dreamweaver's Garden (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:53:24 AM AEST
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Nice write...
emotional, sincere.


Re: Dreamweaver's Garden (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 04:54:59 PM AEST
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Somehow I missed this... but i absolutely
loved this Brooke it is so beautifully and
poignantly written. So deep and yeah I just
loved this. I hope to see more from you soon.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Dreamweaver's Garden (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 11:49:35 AM AEST
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WEll written so soft and demure of this write. to have an escape of fantasy is to have a reality. Beautiful.

Amber Rose Yeager :)




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