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And I don't know what it is
But I feel so unknown
Because no one will let me in

Even though I have people all around me
Nothing seems to have any meaning
And even though I have so much to live for
There is still an emptiness within my core

Maybe all I needed was one person
One person I could tell anything to
Not these other people who make assertions
Just someone whose trust is deep and true

I am so alone
And I don't know what it is
But I feel so unknown
Because no one will let me in

Now there are people I could trust
But this can so easily be crushed
Cause in the blink of an eye
All of the feelings I once had just died

I thought that you were that one person
But now you just made things worsen
No need to take this personnel
Just cause you left me burning in hell

I am so alone
And I don't know what it is
But I feel so unknown
Because no one will let me in

Maybe it has nothing to do with anyone else but me
Or maybe I shouldn't care so much about what people think
Maybe I am finally starting to see what my life can be
This has come just in time as I am in too deep

Nothing left for me to discover
Everything has been uncovered
As I look deep inside my soul
I see everything and I'm taking hold [comments] => 4 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Tobe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Alone

Contributed by Tobe on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:27:37 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I am so alone
And I don't know what it is
But I feel so unknown
Because no one will let me in

Even though I have people all around me
Nothing seems to have any meaning
And even though I have so much to live for
There is still an emptiness within my core

Maybe all I needed was one person
One person I could tell anything to
Not these other people who make assertions
Just someone whose trust is deep and true

I am so alone
And I don't know what it is
But I feel so unknown
Because no one will let me in

Now there are people I could trust
But this can so easily be crushed
Cause in the blink of an eye
All of the feelings I once had just died

I thought that you were that one person
But now you just made things worsen
No need to take this personnel
Just cause you left me burning in hell

I am so alone
And I don't know what it is
But I feel so unknown
Because no one will let me in

Maybe it has nothing to do with anyone else but me
Or maybe I shouldn't care so much about what people think
Maybe I am finally starting to see what my life can be
This has come just in time as I am in too deep

Nothing left for me to discover
Everything has been uncovered
As I look deep inside my soul
I see everything and I'm taking hold

Copyright © Tobe ... [ 2005-02-07 23:27:37]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:31:55 PM AEST
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Great poem..Then ending is good and I like the way you structured it

Clark

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleeding_Nightmares on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:41:36 PM AEST
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Deep vivid and realistic, awesome poem.

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 12:11:28 AM AEST
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You could tell me and i'll tell you me problems, well that would acctually be kinda weird because we barley know eachother but still i'll listen to you and you don't have to listen to me but you could if you want. Well i hope to here from you latter!
=Jen=

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:51:01 AM AEST
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I can relate to this so much, feeling alone sucks but sometimes it's liberating. Great write Toby i liked this a lot.

Jane x

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