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You darken my life
With your existence
You shatter my heart
With your resistance

Let me take you
To where you've never been before
It's where only I can hear your screams
And can decimate your dreams

Let me take you
Behind the bedroom door
Where you'll join all those I adore

Let imagination be forgotten
And your screams be remembered
Be your begotten lover

I'll take you
Like you took me
To Hell

I hold the three nails
And you hold nothing
But me

As I nail you to be
Forever a part of me [comments] => 9 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 13 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Bloodless Veins

Contributed by essentially9 on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:00:16 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Bloodless Veins

You darken my life
With your existence
You shatter my heart
With your resistance

Let me take you
To where you've never been before
It's where only I can hear your screams
And can decimate your dreams

Let me take you
Behind the bedroom door
Where you'll join all those I adore

Let imagination be forgotten
And your screams be remembered
Be your begotten lover

I'll take you
Like you took me
To Hell

I hold the three nails
And you hold nothing
But me

As I nail you to be
Forever a part of me

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-02-07 22:00:16]
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Re: Bloodless Veins (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:06:07 PM AEST
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"I hold the three nails
And you hold nothing
But me

As I nail you to be
Forever a part of me"

I like that... it was so unexpected. Good stuff.

Re: Bloodless Veins (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:45:09 PM AEST
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Very graphic Jinnifer-- Nice touch at the end

Clark

Re: Bloodless Veins (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:42:19 PM AEST
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eeh creepy I loved the imagery it was bloody
and disturbing. A truly great write you held me
with every word.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Bloodless Veins (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleeding_Nightmares on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:45:49 PM AEST
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Vivid deep and written with dark emotions, excellent poem.

Re: Bloodless Veins (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 02:36:13 AM AEST
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an excellent write.
I throughly enjoyed it
Great ending

Re: Bloodless Veins (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:46:14 AM AEST
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Your last line is awesome..All about our endings hun..A sharp write a very good feel I got here..Dark and amazing..Sweet kitten.

Re: Bloodless Veins (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 02:29:28 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful
vivid and deep.

Re: Bloodless Veins (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 03:35:48 PM AEST
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truly a dark and sad poem, I saw that there was an emotional conection with the other person in this, but not recipricated, and taking your last advances to make it work. This is very depictive of one actin on there desires to be with some one taking them making them part of them, mabye, even rapeing them. all thoughts aside this was desterbingly good.

this was a surprisingly good poem I saw deep emotin in it I liked how you ended it "...As I nail you to be Forever a part of me." very good, please do post again. God bless.

wolfman

Re: Bloodless Veins (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:53:23 PM AEST
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This poem pulled me in and shut me behind the door. I felt all the strong emotions. Good one.

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