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I always said I wanted to fall in love
you showed me how it felt and took it all away.
I know times and feelings change
but why do you cause so much pain.
Love is supposed to be fun and worth the wait
but all thhis time with you just sucked.
You play my emotions
break my heart...what hapened to the part
where happily ever after comes to play
why couldnt you have just stayed
so far away from my heart.
even though i may say i love you.....I dont
I'm too young for love because it's
not all just fun and games .
My emotions are real my hearts not a
toy your not a man just a little boy who thinks
he knows what he wants but you sure are wrong
My last bit of advice is learn
what you want then let me know.
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What's Falling in love

Contributed by XxCrYiNg4YoUxX on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:59:09 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I always said I wanted to fall in love
you showed me how it felt and took it all away.
I know times and feelings change
but why do you cause so much pain.
Love is supposed to be fun and worth the wait
but all thhis time with you just sucked.
You play my emotions
break my heart...what hapened to the part
where happily ever after comes to play
why couldnt you have just stayed
so far away from my heart.
even though i may say i love you.....I dont
I'm too young for love because it's
not all just fun and games .
My emotions are real my hearts not a
toy your not a man just a little boy who thinks
he knows what he wants but you sure are wrong
My last bit of advice is learn
what you want then let me know.

Copyright © XxCrYiNg4YoUxX ... [ 2005-02-07 20:59:09]
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Re: What's Falling in love (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:13:20 PM AEST
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Nothing gold can stay sweet heart. It reminds me of a poem by Robert Frost it goes something like this.

Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold.
Her early leaf's a flower;
But only so an hour.
Then leaf subsides to leaf.
So Eden sank to grief,
So dawn goes down today.
Nothing gold can stay.

Look at mine called Gene and Lucy Birdsong.

Re: What's Falling in love (User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 06:25:20 PM AEST
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being young and falling in love is a dangerous zone .. you get hurt so many times .. believe me .. i never knew what love was like so i went in with too many expectations which were stupid .. i wont know what true love is untill im married .. so i have much learning to do .. hopefully you can understand what im saying !

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