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In my dead soul you’ll take a sweet bath,
Never a tear will fall from your eyes,
You will happily wait & watch as I die.

After my stench has lay inside your nose,
You will sure celebrate by laying a black rose,
Next to the grave where my flesh slowly rots,
As the memory of our loves is simply forgot.

I am even now to you dead as I breathe,
From my dear heart I can feel the love leave,
Blackened by hurt, maimed by despair,
All I ever wanted was for you to just care.

My body lays still not knowing any motion,
As if it’s been drugged with the devils dark potion,
You & the devil are entwined you are one,
& in my sheer suffering you both find your fun.

My body & soul are participants in your game,
But never on you lays any of the blame,
The game keeper will end up with my soul,
& always to him I’ll be the one paying the toll.

My life to you is all but nothing,
You are the turkey & I am the stuffing,
I am so worthless so insignificant,
& in my demise your money’s well spent.
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Over My Dead Body

Contributed by pixie on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:29:27 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Over my dead body you will laugh,
In my dead soul you’ll take a sweet bath,
Never a tear will fall from your eyes,
You will happily wait & watch as I die.

After my stench has lay inside your nose,
You will sure celebrate by laying a black rose,
Next to the grave where my flesh slowly rots,
As the memory of our loves is simply forgot.

I am even now to you dead as I breathe,
From my dear heart I can feel the love leave,
Blackened by hurt, maimed by despair,
All I ever wanted was for you to just care.

My body lays still not knowing any motion,
As if it’s been drugged with the devils dark potion,
You & the devil are entwined you are one,
& in my sheer suffering you both find your fun.

My body & soul are participants in your game,
But never on you lays any of the blame,
The game keeper will end up with my soul,
& always to him I’ll be the one paying the toll.

My life to you is all but nothing,
You are the turkey & I am the stuffing,
I am so worthless so insignificant,
& in my demise your money’s well spent.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-02-07 12:29:27]
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Re: Over My Dead Body (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:37:59 PM AEST
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Dark and depressing but my god you are a great writer.

Re: Over My Dead Body (User Rating: 1 )
by noone on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:14:02 PM AEST
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This is another great poem! It is very dark, which is the way i like my poems. Well done. Keep writing more.

Kirsty xx

Re: Over My Dead Body (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 02:24:07 PM AEST
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In my dead soul you’ll take a sweet bath,

ok..this gave me gooseflesh..and then the stench part..
I'm outta here..LOL

Re: Over My Dead Body (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 02:58:24 PM AEST
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Another great write Kriss, send me some of those poetic energy will ya lol. I need tons of it.

Always,
Jane x

Re: Over My Dead Body (User Rating: 1 )
by Crimson_Valley on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:41:37 PM AEST
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I love this poem so much! It is so GOOD!! You are such a good writer. It's so powerful! One of the best poems I have ever read.

Re: Over My Dead Body (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:59:11 PM AEST
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I agree with afterdark's comment. The
rhyming in this poem was impeccable and, to
put it quite bluntly I loved this. *Buys her a
drink and gives a toast to her great poem*

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Over My Dead Body (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 11:02:45 PM AEST
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Great write. I hope you are not really feeling this way.

Scott

Re: Over My Dead Body (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleeding_Nightmares on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:36:59 AM AEST
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Deep dark and emotional write, full on and well described details, excellent poem.

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