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Array ( [sid] => 83327 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost [time] => 2005-02-07 03:14:38 [hometext] => feeling depressed [bodytext] => Depressed at the point of break down
Everything falling all around
Can't do anything
Wanting to cry all night
In a world of shame
Nothing left to fight for
Mind and heart built up and ready for love
Just to be let down
My heart sinking deeper and deeper
Drowning in my fears
Fears of being heart broken and alone
Crying at night, Waking alone
Feeling lost under the stars
Seeing freedom on the edge of a knife
Feeling free after each cut
Free falling with no end
No strings, no ropes
Nothing to break my fall
My life flashing through my eyes
Useless and meaningless
Depressed grabbing for knives
Wanting to take this life in a way I never expected
Tired of feeling the tears
Tired of fighting the tears
Driven back against the wall
Wasted time, Wasted dreams
Living a wasted life with nothing to show for
Tied down, held down from walking and fighting back
Dreaming of better days
Wondering how I would be if things were different
Depressed reaching for my gun
Wanting to ease the everlasting pain
Tired of holding the tears
Tired of blurry eyes
Crawling under the stairs
Wasting time, Wasting words
Nothing left, Gun is loaded
On my knees I cry out "I'm lost"
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Lost

Contributed by stonedraider23 on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 03:14:38 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Depressed at the point of break down
Everything falling all around
Can't do anything
Wanting to cry all night
In a world of shame
Nothing left to fight for
Mind and heart built up and ready for love
Just to be let down
My heart sinking deeper and deeper
Drowning in my fears
Fears of being heart broken and alone
Crying at night, Waking alone
Feeling lost under the stars
Seeing freedom on the edge of a knife
Feeling free after each cut
Free falling with no end
No strings, no ropes
Nothing to break my fall
My life flashing through my eyes
Useless and meaningless
Depressed grabbing for knives
Wanting to take this life in a way I never expected
Tired of feeling the tears
Tired of fighting the tears
Driven back against the wall
Wasted time, Wasted dreams
Living a wasted life with nothing to show for
Tied down, held down from walking and fighting back
Dreaming of better days
Wondering how I would be if things were different
Depressed reaching for my gun
Wanting to ease the everlasting pain
Tired of holding the tears
Tired of blurry eyes
Crawling under the stairs
Wasting time, Wasting words
Nothing left, Gun is loaded
On my knees I cry out "I'm lost"




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Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 04:18:15 AM AEST
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that is a great write
so much emotion

elizabeth


Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 05:03:43 AM AEST
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very nice


Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilcaf on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:12:36 PM AEST
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very heartfelt write take care hun xx


Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:53:04 AM AEST
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this doesnt sound like u,whats going on over there?is there something i can help u with?life shouldnt be wasted.ur suppose to be maken the best of everything,i love u get on msn now!!




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