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[title] => Dyslexia Depression
[time] => 2005-02-07 00:45:15
[hometext] => I WANT TO KNOW HOW GOOD THIS POEM IS, SO PLEASE GIVE ME SOME FEED BACK
[bodytext] => Im sad im mad, everyday i feel bad always behind i will never feel fine, im sick and tired of this lonely mind i wish i wasn't so much behind. Sometimes i wish i was as smart like Hannibal Lector so i can cut my head open and take my brains out and throw it away might as well im slow minded with and with out it any ways. For sal for sale im selling my brain to some one thats really insane and doesnt care if it will always give pain or fail, the only place it will take u is to jail because you will be busy trying to commit suicide very so high on the building close to the sky.
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Dyslexia Depression
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es12us
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Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:45:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Im sad im mad, everyday i feel bad always behind i will never feel fine, im sick and tired of this lonely mind i wish i wasn't so much behind. Sometimes i wish i was as smart like Hannibal Lector so i can cut my head open and take my brains out and throw it away might as well im slow minded with and with out it any ways. For sal for sale im selling my brain to some one thats really insane and doesnt care if it will always give pain or fail, the only place it will take u is to jail because you will be busy trying to commit suicide very so high on the building close to the sky.
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Re: Dyslexia Depression
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:54:18 AM AEST
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SOUNDS ORIGINAL!IF YOU TAKE ALL THAT YOU GOT & THROW OR GIVE IT ALL AWAY,YOU WILL HAVE NOTHING LEFT TO EXPRESS WHAT YOU WANNA SAY!!IF YOUR THOUGHTS & WORDS ARE FOREVER SILENCED-YOU WILL NO LONGER HAVE A WAY OR SOLUTION TO STOP THE INNER VIOLENCE!!!KEEP WHAT YOU CAN & GIVE IT ALL YOU GOT-OR NO ONE WILL NEVER KNOW WHERE YOU STAND OR IF YOU EVER GOT IT TO FINALLY STOP!!!!INTRESTING WRITE!!!!!
DAN!!!!!! |
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Re: Dyslexia Depression
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:59:32 AM AEST
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It's not bad....some of it is awfully awkward but that's ok really...keep writing (and read((READ!)), reading helps the writing)
always, abraham |
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Re: Dyslexia Depression
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 08:49:31 AM AEST
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This was an okay poem.. It was kind of awkward to read.. Good Job though..
Take care
Christina |
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