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Array ( [sid] => 83268 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rainy Day Thoughts [time] => 2005-02-06 20:21:15 [hometext] => Another old one of mine but I still enjoy it. [bodytext] => RAINY DAY THOUGHTS

The sky today reminds me of —
a gothic book from yesteryear
where out upon the Scottish moores
a damsel weeps

Her heart, her dreams, lay shattered
as the grass beneath her feet

Too late she learned that love
can slip into the mist

Leaving behind a world where
sorrow blooms

“Come hide me mist” she cries
with heaving breast

Let me escape to where
love lives.

Carol Sossaman
Jan.5,1990

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Rainy Day Thoughts

Contributed by freckle on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:21:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

RAINY DAY THOUGHTS

The sky today reminds me of —
a gothic book from yesteryear
where out upon the Scottish moores
a damsel weeps

Her heart, her dreams, lay shattered
as the grass beneath her feet

Too late she learned that love
can slip into the mist

Leaving behind a world where
sorrow blooms

“Come hide me mist” she cries
with heaving breast

Let me escape to where
love lives.

Carol Sossaman
Jan.5,1990

Copyright Â© freckle ... [ 2005-02-06 20:21:15]
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Re: Rainy Day Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:07:39 PM AEST
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Nice poem. I really like this. I can relate, I bet alot of people can too heh.

Scott

Re: Rainy Day Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:20:24 PM AEST
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Nice write do you have any recent ones I'd like to read more?

Re: Rainy Day Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 02:32:35 AM AEST
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Wow.... I do not know what else to say but.... Wow!

Re: Rainy Day Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:41:11 PM AEST
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This had some very poetic thoughts in it.....I love it.
well done
Roses
Larry

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