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Array ( [sid] => 83255 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My dream [time] => 2005-02-06 18:50:41 [hometext] => Coment please [bodytext] => I'm just sitting here thinking about my life,
Then you said please hold at your hand,
and lets exchang goldin bands,
because i want you in my life,
i want you to be my wife,

Then My dream endded and as i sit here thinking of you,
Thinking about the weird things we use to do,
all of the old times when "sex" wasn't cool,
now I feel like a fool,
Because your not who i thought,
if we wouldn't of fought,
we would still be together,
and everything would be better, [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 21 [informant] => jjones12 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

My dream

Contributed by jjones12 on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 06:50:41 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I'm just sitting here thinking about my life,
Then you said please hold at your hand,
and lets exchang goldin bands,
because i want you in my life,
i want you to be my wife,

Then My dream endded and as i sit here thinking of you,
Thinking about the weird things we use to do,
all of the old times when "sex" wasn't cool,
now I feel like a fool,
Because your not who i thought,
if we wouldn't of fought,
we would still be together,
and everything would be better,

Copyright © jjones12 ... [ 2005-02-06 18:50:41]
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Re: My dream (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 06:57:21 PM AEST
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Nice little poem here. I totally relate to the subject matter here, and I can only tell myself that fights are sumtimes necessary, cause if u dont fight all that time, you would b blind 2 problems that havent surfaced yet. It's nice that a poem made me consider things about myself like yours did. Again, easy to relate to, great write

Re: My dream (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:07:15 AM AEST
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I THINK YOU'RE TRYING TO SAY HOW MUCH YOU REGRET A BIG MISTAKE YOU'VE MADE!ALWAYS REMEMBER WHAT F.A.I.T.H. REALLY MEANS! Faith Always Is Tomorrow's Hope!!IF YOU REALLY HAD A DREAM,IT NEVER DIED-IT JUST MIGHT BE OUT OF REACH AT THE TIME!!!ALOT OF HEART IN THIS,YOU'VE GOTTA STILL HAVE ENUFF LEFT TO FIND TRUE LOVE ONCE AGAIN!!!!I WISH YOU WELL!!!!!

DAN!!!!!!

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