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Array ( [sid] => 83236 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Faded Love [time] => 2005-02-06 16:03:37 [hometext] => I know that we are drifting apart...but I don't know if I'm ready to... [bodytext] => Holding him
But letting him slip away

Many oceans that seperate our love
Fading gently
Into the gray waves

I can see your face
Knowing that no matter what I do
We will turn our backs and walk away
Into our own ways of life

You will no longer be a part of me

I walk along this ground
Hidden by the trees
Protecting me from knowing
Knowing how this all will end

Sunlight glittering on fresh tears
Waiting as I look into the never ending world

You fingers slip
Falling so fast
My heart falls with you

I know
I know it's happening
I'm powerless to stop it

What has happened to this beauty
To this world I had created
It dies in my arms
As your love
Dies within my heart

I close my eyes and wish
Wish that this was a world of never ending
Eternal love
Knowing all to well
Such a place does not exist

A porous heart that still feels pain
Life behind a cold mask
Trusting no one
Loving one


[comments] => 2 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 52 [informant] => night_child [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
A Faded Love

Contributed by night_child on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 04:03:37 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



Holding him
But letting him slip away

Many oceans that seperate our love
Fading gently
Into the gray waves

I can see your face
Knowing that no matter what I do
We will turn our backs and walk away
Into our own ways of life

You will no longer be a part of me

I walk along this ground
Hidden by the trees
Protecting me from knowing
Knowing how this all will end

Sunlight glittering on fresh tears
Waiting as I look into the never ending world

You fingers slip
Falling so fast
My heart falls with you

I know
I know it's happening
I'm powerless to stop it

What has happened to this beauty
To this world I had created
It dies in my arms
As your love
Dies within my heart

I close my eyes and wish
Wish that this was a world of never ending
Eternal love
Knowing all to well
Such a place does not exist

A porous heart that still feels pain
Life behind a cold mask
Trusting no one
Loving one






Copyright © night_child ... [ 2005-02-06 16:03:37]
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Re: A Faded Love (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 04:20:28 PM AEST
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this reminded me of a lot of the stuff i've written myself. what stunned me was the completely different way u delivered it. This was really able to pull me right into your state of mind here and I loved the words you've chosen to help convey such strong emotions. Really great write


Re: A Faded Love (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:26:59 AM AEST
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SORRY ABOUT WHAT YOU'RE GOING THRU!BUT YOU'VE EXPRESSED IT VERY WELL IN THIS GREAT PIECE OF POETRY YOU'VE TRACED RIGHT FROM YOUR HEART!!PLEASE TAKE CARE!!!

DAN!!!!




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