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From the sky
Lands on many places
Before it melts
It sinks into it and stays
Like a bad memory from the past
Stuck in your heart because they melted you away
You feel like a million sun rays are shining on you
And you want so badly to feel cold
Looking up at the sky
Clouds start to cover the bright sunny sky
And rain starts pouring down
When one drop hits your face
You smile
Because your heart is cleansed by something simple
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A Rain Drop From The Sky

Contributed by unlovedchild on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 03:20:15 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

A raindrop falls
From the sky
Lands on many places
Before it melts
It sinks into it and stays
Like a bad memory from the past
Stuck in your heart because they melted you away
You feel like a million sun rays are shining on you
And you want so badly to feel cold
Looking up at the sky
Clouds start to cover the bright sunny sky
And rain starts pouring down
When one drop hits your face
You smile
Because your heart is cleansed by something simple
A rain drop from the sky

Copyright © unlovedchild ... [ 2005-02-06 03:20:15]
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Re: A Rain Drop From The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 05:29:14 AM AEST
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Brilliant write Amy, you are becoming quite the write, Keep writing.

Jane x

Re: A Rain Drop From The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:40:11 AM AEST
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Nicely done, Amy! I like the appreciation for the simple things this poem expresses, and the longing for it as a respite of our complicated selves.

Re: A Rain Drop From The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 12:22:47 PM AEST
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wow that was written well, well done Amy, truly well done
pix xx

Re: A Rain Drop From The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleeding_Nightmares on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:22:09 AM AEST
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Deep and passionate, yet so much sorrow woven into your heartfelt words, beautifully written and excellently composed poem

Re: A Rain Drop From The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by KishaLovesCare126 on Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 03:31:20 AM AEST
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very beautiful write.. Sounds almost peaceful..I enjoyed it

W/Luv 4 Lyfe,
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