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Array ( [sid] => 83166 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wait [time] => 2005-02-05 22:37:15 [hometext] => Not one of my best but I'm tired.... [bodytext] => I can't
Wait
Any longer
I want you
Now

I can't
Wait
Another day
I need you
Now

Sick and tired
Of waiting...
Waiting
For our changing

I know it
Will never come

I just needed
someone

To take some
Time
To understand
Me

Not someone
over rated
Not someone
wealthy

It doesnt matter
to me
I just don't
want to
wait
another day
Waiting
For you
To change
You're mind

Face down
suicide
No one around
Died
Ended his life
Because of
Lies
Half *** trys and
Unheard cries
He did'nt want
To Wait...
Face down
On a suicide

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 36 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Wait

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:37:15 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I can't
Wait
Any longer
I want you
Now

I can't
Wait
Another day
I need you
Now

Sick and tired
Of waiting...
Waiting
For our changing

I know it
Will never come

I just needed
someone

To take some
Time
To understand
Me

Not someone
over rated
Not someone
wealthy

It doesnt matter
to me
I just don't
want to
wait
another day
Waiting
For you
To change
You're mind

Face down
suicide
No one around
Died
Ended his life
Because of
Lies
Half *** trys and
Unheard cries
He did'nt want
To Wait...
Face down
On a suicide

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-05 22:37:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Wait (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 11:50:40 PM AEST
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this was incredible clark. bloody amazing. reminds me so much of one of my favorite bands, staind. i cant wait till you next post =]

Re: Wait (User Rating: 1 )
by subchild on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:25:29 AM AEST
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It may not be your best but this is very good..Your flow is top notch as is most of what you do write..Very good.

Re: Wait (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 06:31:47 PM AEST
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I loved it..I want to write one now and use the word hesitating..You've inspired me..to steal maybe..to plagerize..
tired of all the waiting..
tired of your hesitating...

is that stealing??

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