Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 13:08:02 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 83150 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How Far I'll Fall [time] => 2005-02-05 21:05:43 [hometext] => Not somthing that happened to me....Just somthing I wrote [bodytext] => Everytime I turn away
Something
Burns deep inside
Greaving me to stay

I don't know
How far
I'll fall
If I walk away

I can not say
What I need to
Today
I want to
Walk away

But...
I don't know
How far
I'll fall
If I stay

You push at me
You scream at me
You tear at me
But..
You hug me
You kiss me
You said
You love me

I want to make things right
I don't want to screw things up
But I don't know what to do
I love you too
But I can't be with you
But I can't leave you

I guess I'll fail
No matter what
But how far
Do I want
To fall

Fall
In
Love

With you my beautiful
Dove
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 48 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

How Far I'll Fall

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:05:43 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Everytime I turn away
Something
Burns deep inside
Greaving me to stay

I don't know
How far
I'll fall
If I walk away

I can not say
What I need to
Today
I want to
Walk away

But...
I don't know
How far
I'll fall
If I stay

You push at me
You scream at me
You tear at me
But..
You hug me
You kiss me
You said
You love me

I want to make things right
I don't want to screw things up
But I don't know what to do
I love you too
But I can't be with you
But I can't leave you

I guess I'll fail
No matter what
But how far
Do I want
To fall

Fall
In
Love

With you my beautiful
Dove

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-05 21:05:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: How Far I'll Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by dreamer_4_eternity on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:26:26 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I love this poem! It's one of the best I've read today, wow, I can't believe barely anyone had read it, this is a wonderful poem and I have no critisizm (spelt it wrong, I know=))

Re: How Far I'll Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:58:03 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

this would make a better song than a poem because of your repeating the same words at the end of each line. poems dont normally do that. but i thought it would make a better song just because of the rhythym in my head. seems like everyone can write songlike things except me, and im the one that has the guitar and piano, lol.

Re: How Far I'll Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:30:59 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I read e-9s comment and it made me smile..I love to try and write lryics but can't write music..sigh..I thought this quite melodic too..

Re: How Far I'll Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by subchild on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:33:33 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

What does not make you smile you freak...Not to you foreverealone..I liked this here quite alot..Good feeling flow you had gigging here..

Re: How Far I'll Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 01:29:56 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

great job! that's a question that so many people ask themself, the harder you fall the more it hurts....

Curtis

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com