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Array ( [sid] => 8312 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Unworthy [time] => 2002-12-10 00:45:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm never sure of exactly what it is..
You want from me.
You're so illusive, so ambiguous,
in your demands of me.
It never changes, it's always the same.
Some times, I swear, I forget my name.
I get lost in you, and what you want.
It's all got me stretch and gaunt.

All I know…is I'm not enough
I'm so unworthy

Your love is all I desire
But all my efforts backfire
I try to be everything you need
Tried so hard I began to bleed

All I know…is I'm not enough
I'm so unworthy

Finally it's me you adore
Yours forever more
I'm your one desire
Your lover vampire
In the end when I drew my last breath
All you needed to be mine was my death
And yet..

I know I'm not enough
I'm still unworthy [comments] => 4 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Ash [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Unworthy

Contributed by Ash on Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm never sure of exactly what it is..
You want from me.
You're so illusive, so ambiguous,
in your demands of me.
It never changes, it's always the same.
Some times, I swear, I forget my name.
I get lost in you, and what you want.
It's all got me stretch and gaunt.

All I know…is I'm not enough
I'm so unworthy

Your love is all I desire
But all my efforts backfire
I try to be everything you need
Tried so hard I began to bleed

All I know…is I'm not enough
I'm so unworthy

Finally it's me you adore
Yours forever more
I'm your one desire
Your lover vampire
In the end when I drew my last breath
All you needed to be mine was my death
And yet..

I know I'm not enough
I'm still unworthy

Copyright Â© Ash ... [ 2002-12-10 00:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Unworthy (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 01:08:40 AM AEST
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Ash this is so sad....i can honestly say i know exactly what this feels like...try and keep your chin up coz you are worth it....and even tho you dont beleive so you are the one who writes the book in your life....try and beleive in yourself.....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed reading it...it's very sad..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Unworthy (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 05:10:51 PM AEST
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oh ash...this is so good...this is exactly how i feel right now, this is exactly what i needed to read...and it's so beautiful...i don't know what to say...if you want to talk, i'll listen...but wow...

Re: Unworthy (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 04:24:37 PM AEST
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Very good write. Its sad but very good. Don't let no one tell you that your not worthy. Be strong and live your life the way you want thats the only way you'll be happy.

Re: Unworthy (User Rating: 1 )
by dreamweave18 on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 10:09:59 PM AEST
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Your mind and heart is beautiful

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