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Array ( [sid] => 83117 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => boyfriends [time] => 2005-02-05 15:26:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => when i was like 26 there was this dinner
at the red hook inn
we went in the last minute
or maybe for some other reason
and we were eating this dinner

this was pretty good and expensive
i mean; the good and expense were not in line
but i was drinking red wine and then maybe some jd

and there was this little waitress and she was blonde
and soft all over
every time she dreamed over i would have to
make some stupid joke and try to pretend
that i didn't see the genius or the magic
or whatever
of gods hand in this soft vaseline lense blonde

but i did see it
and my girlfriend saw it
and she said "do you like the little blonde waitress"
and i said she is ok and i know her older brother
so that is why . . .

and we went home and slept in the bed with the dog
under the covers and it was good but
i was still an unthinking liar
about the blonde that could have meant something
but never did because
of all the boyfriends [comments] => 1 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 64 [informant] => frannykilledzooey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

boyfriends

Contributed by frannykilledzooey on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 03:26:28 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

when i was like 26 there was this dinner
at the red hook inn
we went in the last minute
or maybe for some other reason
and we were eating this dinner

this was pretty good and expensive
i mean; the good and expense were not in line
but i was drinking red wine and then maybe some jd

and there was this little waitress and she was blonde
and soft all over
every time she dreamed over i would have to
make some stupid joke and try to pretend
that i didn't see the genius or the magic
or whatever
of gods hand in this soft vaseline lense blonde

but i did see it
and my girlfriend saw it
and she said "do you like the little blonde waitress"
and i said she is ok and i know her older brother
so that is why . . .

and we went home and slept in the bed with the dog
under the covers and it was good but
i was still an unthinking liar
about the blonde that could have meant something
but never did because
of all the boyfriends

Copyright © frannykilledzooey ... [ 2005-02-05 15:26:28]
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Re: boyfriends (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 03:57:07 PM AEST
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hmm.... interesting. Makes me wanna read more of yours, I like your style.

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