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It's been haunting all my thoughts
And I just don't understand it
How can I be so distraught
How can I worry for someone else
When I shoudl be worried about me
They'll show me all their scars
Why won't I let them see?
Why won't I tell them what's wrong?
Why won't I tell them I might die?
I guess, it's because they want to
Yet, everynight I cry
I cry because I used to be them
I cry because I care
I cry because they have no strength
To challenge life's little dare
All this pain is on my mind
Making me so blue
I guess I just don't understand
How everyone can throw away the one thing I'm trying to hold on to [comments] => 4 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Different Views Of Life

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 11:54:12 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

There's something on my mind
It's been haunting all my thoughts
And I just don't understand it
How can I be so distraught
How can I worry for someone else
When I shoudl be worried about me
They'll show me all their scars
Why won't I let them see?
Why won't I tell them what's wrong?
Why won't I tell them I might die?
I guess, it's because they want to
Yet, everynight I cry
I cry because I used to be them
I cry because I care
I cry because they have no strength
To challenge life's little dare
All this pain is on my mind
Making me so blue
I guess I just don't understand
How everyone can throw away the one thing I'm trying to hold on to

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-02-05 11:54:12]
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Re: Different Views Of Life (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 12:08:56 PM AEST
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*hugs kie*

Re: Different Views Of Life (User Rating: 1 )
by edwynne on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 12:24:36 PM AEST
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I like this one, I think the ending is the best part.....nice work

Re: Different Views Of Life (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 12:56:40 PM AEST
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simple, throw every one else away and hold on 2

what your fighting for, your motives r admierable,

great writting as usual . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Different Views Of Life (User Rating: 1 )
by tx_graffiti_gal on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:10:09 AM AEST
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need another box of kleenex.. girl you sure know how to write. good person you are. so many troubles are all around you, so many have made you blue. I just want to say. God loves you...

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