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Array ( [sid] => 83090 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You [time] => 2005-02-05 10:13:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You said you loved me
But you lied
You said you'd never hurt me
And so i cried

Im now pregnant
And your gone
You left me with your child
All alone

I sit and think
Of all this spit
I ask my self so many questions
And It goes something like this

How can i have a child
When im still a child myself ?
How could i have listen to you ?
I could of been with somebody else

How could my baby grow up without a dad ?
Just like me, tatterd with the scars i once had
How could i be the blame, when it was both me and you ?
Not some kind of mistake that life puts us through

You had me beliving every word that came out of your mouth
You said we'd always be together, but were not now

You said that forever we'd always be
just about everyday
But all you brang me was these nightmares
That some how want go away

Like i said before
All you did was lie
You left me like this
And made me cry [comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 48 [informant] => SweetButSimple [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
You

Contributed by SweetButSimple on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:13:51 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



You said you loved me
But you lied
You said you'd never hurt me
And so i cried

Im now pregnant
And your gone
You left me with your child
All alone

I sit and think
Of all this spit
I ask my self so many questions
And It goes something like this

How can i have a child
When im still a child myself ?
How could i have listen to you ?
I could of been with somebody else

How could my baby grow up without a dad ?
Just like me, tatterd with the scars i once had
How could i be the blame, when it was both me and you ?
Not some kind of mistake that life puts us through

You had me beliving every word that came out of your mouth
You said we'd always be together, but were not now

You said that forever we'd always be
just about everyday
But all you brang me was these nightmares
That some how want go away

Like i said before
All you did was lie
You left me like this
And made me cry




Copyright © SweetButSimple ... [ 2005-02-05 10:13:51]
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Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:21:25 AM AEST
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Keep your eyes open for a true knight. I was in those shoes once and found one. Defy the odds! This was really emotional "child with a child" got to me, because I was once. Blessings.


Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:26:18 AM AEST
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This is just so sad, what an amazing poem. You have showed us your pain and heart with us thru this poem. I’m so sorry you had to go thru this and he’s a loser for doing this to you. Keep the faith all things will work out soon.

Jane x




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