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Array ( [sid] => 83082 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Final Kiss [time] => 2005-02-05 09:39:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Seventeen years old
not even done with school
always degrading himself
the sensless fool

He once was a great kid
good grades and hundreds of friends
He didn't realise it
but any pain eventually ends

He always said that his greatness
was gone, it was through
I told him it would get better
He'd reply **** you

After she left
it didn't take long
towards the end
he only talked with his bong

He took to the drugs
he wrote his poems and drank his beer
though we were all his friends
we never dared to go near

then one day
he didn't come home
So I searched the places
we once roamed

I found him in the woods
most of the blood drained fro his wrist
he held a note that said
"embrace the blade's final kiss" [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 36 [informant] => crash [notes] => ....edited by mod_6 for language...05-02-05 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Final Kiss

Contributed by crash on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:39:04 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Seventeen years old
not even done with school
always degrading himself
the sensless fool

He once was a great kid
good grades and hundreds of friends
He didn't realise it
but any pain eventually ends

He always said that his greatness
was gone, it was through
I told him it would get better
He'd reply **** you

After she left
it didn't take long
towards the end
he only talked with his bong

He took to the drugs
he wrote his poems and drank his beer
though we were all his friends
we never dared to go near

then one day
he didn't come home
So I searched the places
we once roamed

I found him in the woods
most of the blood drained fro his wrist
he held a note that said
"embrace the blade's final kiss"

Copyright © crash ... [ 2005-02-05 09:39:04]
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Re: Final Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:14:58 AM AEST
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What a sad dark poem, you have writen this so well. May you find peace soon.

Jane x

Re: Final Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:52:17 AM AEST
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Beautiful piece, good job.

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