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Array ( [sid] => 83036 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Look what you've done, Sister [time] => 2005-02-04 22:34:37 [hometext] => Overly dramatic but I wrote it when I was just so fed up with my dad, step-mom, and sister. [bodytext] => Can you see me?
Oh, yes you can,
Though only when I've done something slightly wrong.
You see me with red hot emotion.

Your lives revolve around four things:
Your precious jobs,
Your precious twin boys,
Your precious monster,
And making sure I do nothing wrong.

Can you see her?
Oh, only sometimes,
You see her hourly temper tantrums and they matter so little.
You see her and you want me to pity her.

My life is ruined by at least four things:
A fight with my mom,
A fight with you,
A fight with myself,
And a sister who summarizes the family.

Can I see anything?
Oh, you better beleive I can,
I can see all of the confusion bouncing around in this asylum.
I can see all of you.

My sister is made of these four things:
Major anger management problems,
Major spoil-treatment,
Major babying,
And an assuption that because she is 'depressed' she can get away with everything.

Can she see anything?
Oh, no nothing but herself,
She can see that she is getting under our skin now, though.
She sees what her seven-year-old mind wants her to.

I'm sick of these four things:
Being peeved by her temper at 2 am,
Being peeved by your constant attempt to push my buttons,
Being peeved by my inability to do anything right,
And the rest of what this world throws my way.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 23 [informant] => Jane_Doe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
Look what you've done, Sister

Contributed by Jane_Doe on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 10:34:37 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



Can you see me?
Oh, yes you can,
Though only when I've done something slightly wrong.
You see me with red hot emotion.

Your lives revolve around four things:
Your precious jobs,
Your precious twin boys,
Your precious monster,
And making sure I do nothing wrong.

Can you see her?
Oh, only sometimes,
You see her hourly temper tantrums and they matter so little.
You see her and you want me to pity her.

My life is ruined by at least four things:
A fight with my mom,
A fight with you,
A fight with myself,
And a sister who summarizes the family.

Can I see anything?
Oh, you better beleive I can,
I can see all of the confusion bouncing around in this asylum.
I can see all of you.

My sister is made of these four things:
Major anger management problems,
Major spoil-treatment,
Major babying,
And an assuption that because she is 'depressed' she can get away with everything.

Can she see anything?
Oh, no nothing but herself,
She can see that she is getting under our skin now, though.
She sees what her seven-year-old mind wants her to.

I'm sick of these four things:
Being peeved by her temper at 2 am,
Being peeved by your constant attempt to push my buttons,
Being peeved by my inability to do anything right,
And the rest of what this world throws my way.




Copyright © Jane_Doe ... [ 2005-02-04 22:34:37]
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Re: Look what you've done, Sister (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 11:16:03 PM AEST
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You definately have a full plate of emotions to deal with. I can understand where the stress comes from. Great write.

The Voice


Re: Look what you've done, Sister (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 04:47:26 AM AEST
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This let your emotions out, strong write.




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