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With my life is how I pay your toll,
Day after day you stick in these pins,
That hurt me so & tears through my skin.

You hold me in you hand & in they go,
Not at all fast you keep the torture slow,
Making me really feel my given pain,
Killing my soul & driving me insane.

When you’ve finished you put me down,
I wait in fear of when you’ll next be around,
As I know you will hurt me for no reason,
Take from me my warm & friendly season.

I have scars all over you never miss a spot,
To live for your bad attention is all I have got,
I wish I was a doll that you could care for,
Not one you spit at & leave on the floor.

If you looked into my dark eyes,
Maybe you’d hear all my pain stricken cries,
But you show me no human emotion,
The devils work gets all of your devotion.

I have a heart & I do bleed,
But still you carry on & proceed,
Stabbing in your weapons of hurt,
Making me suffer & feel like nothing, like dirt.
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Voodoo Doll

Contributed by pixie on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 03:30:05 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I feel just like a voodoo doll,
With my life is how I pay your toll,
Day after day you stick in these pins,
That hurt me so & tears through my skin.

You hold me in you hand & in they go,
Not at all fast you keep the torture slow,
Making me really feel my given pain,
Killing my soul & driving me insane.

When you’ve finished you put me down,
I wait in fear of when you’ll next be around,
As I know you will hurt me for no reason,
Take from me my warm & friendly season.

I have scars all over you never miss a spot,
To live for your bad attention is all I have got,
I wish I was a doll that you could care for,
Not one you spit at & leave on the floor.

If you looked into my dark eyes,
Maybe you’d hear all my pain stricken cries,
But you show me no human emotion,
The devils work gets all of your devotion.

I have a heart & I do bleed,
But still you carry on & proceed,
Stabbing in your weapons of hurt,
Making me suffer & feel like nothing, like dirt.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-02-04 15:30:05]
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Re: Voodoo Doll (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 06:20:26 PM AEST
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touching and heart warming pix, sory 4 oyur pain . .

((((4u))))

Re: Voodoo Doll (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 06:46:12 PM AEST
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Very true and heartfelt write. Could have been ten times better if you added vivid imagery. Keep up the good work.
ALINA

Re: Voodoo Doll (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 01:52:41 AM AEST
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ouch......... hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Voodoo Doll (User Rating: 1 )
by Jezabel on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 01:56:30 AM AEST
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sad luv. i know the feelin. good write.

Re: Voodoo Doll (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 05:36:01 AM AEST
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*Hugs You*

Kriss that was such a sad powerful, emotional write.
This was really heartbreaking coz i know what you meant, i've been there and it hurts so bad. You'll pull thru and never doubt that.
You have writen this so well, Thanks for sharing it.

Always,
Jane x

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