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Array ( [sid] => 82973 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => sunken with love bites [time] => 2005-02-04 13:55:05 [hometext] => how much love till im sunken under,when you've gone im left with these scars,love bites [bodytext] => baby please
i love you listen
i know you like to touch
but enough is enough
i feel like its a test
i feel ready
but part of me ashamed
if i wont will you leave
i believe in romance
but is this really love?
im sunken under
i feel like im a toy
to use and abuse
to chew on when bored
love bites all over me
scars around by body
my skin marked by you
not pure anymore
iam not new
i have been used
that's how it feels
under these eyes lies a sunken soul
my body a playtoy
not for my enjoyment yours
im getting used and abused
sunken with love bites
i lay back down
the night gone
the smell of you lingering... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

sunken with love bites

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 01:55:05 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

baby please
i love you listen
i know you like to touch
but enough is enough
i feel like its a test
i feel ready
but part of me ashamed
if i wont will you leave
i believe in romance
but is this really love?
im sunken under
i feel like im a toy
to use and abuse
to chew on when bored
love bites all over me
scars around by body
my skin marked by you
not pure anymore
iam not new
i have been used
that's how it feels
under these eyes lies a sunken soul
my body a playtoy
not for my enjoyment yours
im getting used and abused
sunken with love bites
i lay back down
the night gone
the smell of you lingering...

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2005-02-04 13:55:05]
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Re: sunken with love bites (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 07:31:02 PM AEST
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not too much form to it...much emotion though...kinda sad how some people use others that way. love bits...kinda says more then one thing there...nice job..

Auryn

Re: sunken with love bites (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 02:04:06 PM AEST
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love sux

awesome poem...so much emotion...so much to say

great write

- Beth -

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