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Array ( [sid] => 82936 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Two sides!!! [time] => 2005-02-04 02:43:45 [hometext] => hey this is my first poem i submitted online. I really hope you like it!!! [bodytext] => She lay still upon the ground
In a dark chamber she is tightly bound
Revealing her gift was her biggest mistake
For being my slave is now her chosen fate.

All she worked for is now in vain
Slowly bringing me power through her pain
Begging for mercy through her cries
She stares deeply into my hard cold eyes.

As she looks at me her heart beats faster
I smile for I am now her master
Victimized and trapped within my burning hate
She is all alone it is already too late.

Her broken spirit, my cold heart
We were one, but now we’re breaking apart
Trying to overcome with her mystical power
Her hope is crushed by the hour.

Letting go of the mirror it breaks in half
My evil smirk turns into a laugh
Inside me she will forever fight
Until I finally decide to let her see the light.



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Two sides!!!

Contributed by Stacey on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 02:43:45 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



She lay still upon the ground
In a dark chamber she is tightly bound
Revealing her gift was her biggest mistake
For being my slave is now her chosen fate.

All she worked for is now in vain
Slowly bringing me power through her pain
Begging for mercy through her cries
She stares deeply into my hard cold eyes.

As she looks at me her heart beats faster
I smile for I am now her master
Victimized and trapped within my burning hate
She is all alone it is already too late.

Her broken spirit, my cold heart
We were one, but now we’re breaking apart
Trying to overcome with her mystical power
Her hope is crushed by the hour.

Letting go of the mirror it breaks in half
My evil smirk turns into a laugh
Inside me she will forever fight
Until I finally decide to let her see the light.







Copyright © Stacey ... [ 2005-02-04 02:43:45]
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Re: Two sides!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 02:48:21 AM AEST
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She jus might be a bit smarter than u think so I wouldn't laugh too hard.
huggs,
emy


Re: Two sides!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 03:09:57 AM AEST
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I must agree with Emy: NEVER underestimate! Greets, X


Re: Two sides!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by craz2 on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 10:02:16 AM AEST
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i hope you are really not doing this. it is cruel to play with ones heart. It looks like this is one side. YOURS a


Re: Two sides!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 07:28:57 PM AEST
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'Inside me she will forever fight'

another good poem...i wrote one similar to this, with the whole new mirror thing, but a slighty different approach..but anyways, this is a good poem. i like the two sides thing and all...keep it up.

Auryn




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