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Array ( [sid] => 82918 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No I'm Not Ok [time] => 2005-02-03 23:20:52 [hometext] => Another one for Chris Foster, they just keep coming don't they? [bodytext] => No I'm not ok
Because you'll never be alright
I'll never get to see you again
After that unavoidable night
The night that I can't save you
The night that we'll all cry
Mourning because we love you
The night that you have to die
No I'm not ok
Because I gave you all my heart
I fell back in love again
Before I knew we'd be ripped apart
Ripped apart by nature's force
It plays with us and throws us away
So if you ever ask again
No I'm not ok [comments] => 5 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

No I'm Not Ok

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:20:52 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

No I'm not ok
Because you'll never be alright
I'll never get to see you again
After that unavoidable night
The night that I can't save you
The night that we'll all cry
Mourning because we love you
The night that you have to die
No I'm not ok
Because I gave you all my heart
I fell back in love again
Before I knew we'd be ripped apart
Ripped apart by nature's force
It plays with us and throws us away
So if you ever ask again
No I'm not ok

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-02-03 23:20:52]
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Re: No I'm Not Ok (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:29:28 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well, hang tuff.
huggs,
emy

Re: No I'm Not Ok (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthie1983 on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:50:42 PM AEST
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Its a touching poem with alot of thoughts. Makes you remember the loved one who passed.

Re: No I'm Not Ok (User Rating: 1 )
by Arsenic on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 05:02:14 PM AEST
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Nice.

As for "they keep coming"... for me most of what I've written is regarding a certain someone or emotions tied to events around them. Even when I try to go another direction I often end up back at the same place.

Still, it is from the hart, and you write well. I like the thoughts and emotions you express. In this one, the way we respond to folks who ask if we are ok, and expecting us to "be brave" and carry on as if a borken hart is nothing at all.

ARSENIC

Re: No I'm Not Ok (User Rating: 1 )
by KishaLovesCare126 on Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:21:39 PM AEST
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WOW!!!!!!!!!! totally blown away... WONDERFUL SAD WRITE..... AWESOME!

W/LUV 4 LYFE,
CARE

Re: No I'm Not Ok (User Rating: 1 )
by tx_graffiti_gal on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:11:08 AM AEST
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CRYING..

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