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Array ( [sid] => 82910 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Stupidity [time] => 2005-02-03 22:32:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Your Stupidity

Careless with indifference
Hating the passion given
Loving the pain your in
Reciprocated annihilation

Red rivers flow
With flawed reflections
Too weak to forget
The soulless perceptions

Problems are blamed
And how you were raised
The truth is bleeding
From your colorless eyes
But the tears dilute
For complete uselessness

Noteless and discordant
But the vibrations still sounding
Until reasonless disruptions
Stop your heart ache [comments] => 4 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 13 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Your Stupidity

Contributed by essentially9 on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:32:43 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Your Stupidity

Careless with indifference
Hating the passion given
Loving the pain your in
Reciprocated annihilation

Red rivers flow
With flawed reflections
Too weak to forget
The soulless perceptions

Problems are blamed
And how you were raised
The truth is bleeding
From your colorless eyes
But the tears dilute
For complete uselessness

Noteless and discordant
But the vibrations still sounding
Until reasonless disruptions
Stop your heart ache

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-02-03 22:32:43]
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Re: Your Stupidity (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:38:59 PM AEST
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loving the pain your in ohhhhh that sounds so much like someone I know....... this was great so strong and to the point
Michelle

Re: Your Stupidity (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:30:31 PM AEST
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This is such a great write... Damn Your good...Again :)

Re: Your Stupidity (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 12:03:26 AM AEST
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Very good wording here ..I really like the way you used certain phrases in this one..Again yes you kitten have done very well..

Re: Your Stupidity (User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 09:55:27 PM AEST
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Excellent work. The second stanza really jumps out and calls to me. I love it. Amazing word choices too.

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