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Array ( [sid] => 82899 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She Didn't Remember [time] => 2005-02-03 21:39:55 [hometext] => I wrote this monday night. When a part of me died [bodytext] => I said goodbye to you last night
As slowly, the night passed on
And with it, the phone hung dead at my fingertips
While the dial tone stayed on.

I waited for it to ring
With spirit I willed it to sound
But it stayed placid and did not sing
I slowly slid to the ground

Take me now lord
Make it quick and painless
For I shall not survive the night
I fear I’ve lost the fight...

As sanity leaves me last
I see my life go by so fast
Too short for one man, I believe
But then again-I now must leave

Go in peace my friends
For naught shall you see me again

Down on my knees I will forever lie
Through darkness and end...

-goodbye
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She Didn't Remember

Contributed by dream_protector_bp on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:39:55 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I said goodbye to you last night
As slowly, the night passed on
And with it, the phone hung dead at my fingertips
While the dial tone stayed on.

I waited for it to ring
With spirit I willed it to sound
But it stayed placid and did not sing
I slowly slid to the ground

Take me now lord
Make it quick and painless
For I shall not survive the night
I fear I’ve lost the fight...

As sanity leaves me last
I see my life go by so fast
Too short for one man, I believe
But then again-I now must leave

Go in peace my friends
For naught shall you see me again

Down on my knees I will forever lie
Through darkness and end...

-goodbye

Copyright Â© dream_protector_bp ... [ 2005-02-03 21:39:55]
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Re: She Didn't Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Twitch06 on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:48:27 PM AEST
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u put great expression in this, i saw what happend in ur words. a nice flow with them as well. great work here, keep it up. and im sorry for you to feel deeply in pain.

~Kristen

Re: She Didn't Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by dreamer_for_eternity on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:52:18 PM AEST
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I felt ur emotion, you have talent in writing... I hope you feel better though

Re: She Didn't Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by absentangel69 on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:39:08 PM AEST
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i like you ending it was a perfect way to go

Re: She Didn't Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 12:24:08 AM AEST
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Awesome write...great flow. Really enjoyed reading it...full of emotion, very sad, great ending! TD

Re: She Didn't Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 01:47:53 AM AEST
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I can really sense how heartbroken you were when you wrote this. The emotion just floats out of this great piece. Excellent write.

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