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Array ( [sid] => 82894 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => About Trevor [time] => 2005-02-03 21:17:53 [hometext] => *i wrote this 3 years ago in 7th grade. The rhyme scheme is all wrong but i think it's funny* [bodytext] => your hair is buzzed and brown
and you never seem to wear a frown
your eyes are so bright
i could stare at them all night

i like the way you walk
when you're walking down the hall
i like the way you talk
and your basketball

i wish i could talk to you
but i'll trip on my shoe
i'm nervous when i'm around you
and i only wish you knew
that i love you [comments] => 6 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 33 [informant] => breny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
About Trevor

Contributed by breny on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:17:53 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



your hair is buzzed and brown
and you never seem to wear a frown
your eyes are so bright
i could stare at them all night

i like the way you walk
when you're walking down the hall
i like the way you talk
and your basketball

i wish i could talk to you
but i'll trip on my shoe
i'm nervous when i'm around you
and i only wish you knew
that i love you




Copyright © breny ... [ 2005-02-03 21:17:53]
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Re: About Trevor (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:30:10 PM AEST
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awww, sweet poem, i enjoyed reading it bren, so
much so i didn't noticed the problem with rhyming
lol . . . keep up the good work . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: About Trevor (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:57:18 PM AEST
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Yep I reconize the symtoms....you have fallen...keep writing though.


Re: About Trevor (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 12:26:49 AM AEST
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Ahhh 7th grade love...I enjoyed this poem, it was cute! TD


Re: About Trevor (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:02:10 PM AEST
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Awww cute poem.

Spazzo


Re: About Trevor (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 01:13:20 AM AEST
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this is very sweet


Re: About Trevor (User Rating: 1 )
by Writting_Fever on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:11:41 PM AEST
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its so cute. the fact that your in 7th grade and in love is even cuter!




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