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Confused, unable to see what's true
Distressed, casting around for what I can find
Insane, losing my heart and mind

And it's all because of you
and everything you put me through
You have me wound around myself
With feelings I can't seem to shelf
'Round and 'round my mind you run
An endless circut that's never done

Content, with the friendship we share
Overwhelmed, with thoughts I can't bear
Hopeful, you'll see me where I stand
Fearful, afraid I will crash as I land

But you know it's all because of you
and all the prayers you put me through
You hold my heart and don't even know
Because I'm terrified to let it show
So 'round and 'round my mind you run
Thoughts of you are never done [comments] => 11 [counter] => 496 [topic] => 33 [informant] => yellow_sundragon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Feelings

Contributed by yellow_sundragon on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:11:40 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Captivated, filled with thoughts of you
Confused, unable to see what's true
Distressed, casting around for what I can find
Insane, losing my heart and mind

And it's all because of you
and everything you put me through
You have me wound around myself
With feelings I can't seem to shelf
'Round and 'round my mind you run
An endless circut that's never done

Content, with the friendship we share
Overwhelmed, with thoughts I can't bear
Hopeful, you'll see me where I stand
Fearful, afraid I will crash as I land

But you know it's all because of you
and all the prayers you put me through
You hold my heart and don't even know
Because I'm terrified to let it show
So 'round and 'round my mind you run
Thoughts of you are never done

Copyright Â© yellow_sundragon ... [ 2005-02-03 21:11:40]
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Re: Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:31:28 PM AEST
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Hey, Wow Really nice poem, I can very well relate!! This is a Great Poem ~!!!!

Re: Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:49:26 PM AEST
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this is beautiful hun, so well written and sooo sweet!! big huggles n' loves ya! nessamum xxx...

@->>->:-

Re: Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 12:28:24 AM AEST
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Beautifully done! I can relate. TD

Re: Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Angelic_Demon on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 06:29:29 PM AEST
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I hope he wakes up, Jaime.

Anyway, this is really good. :D Just remember, men are daft, so it always takes them a while to realize things.

Love, Mara
xoxoxo

Re: Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 08:01:40 PM AEST
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Ah yes, relationships! You captured it so well in your write! I think most of them fit into the cliche...you can't live with 'em and you can't live without 'em! : )

Re: Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 04:27:28 PM AEST
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(uh huh. Thank you, Mara)

Well-expressed and written piece. I know the feeling is not much fun. Here's to hoping he comes around.

Slàn

Andrew

Re: Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 03:53:44 AM AEST
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awww this is so pretty!!! your wording is just lovely. very sweet. :)

Re: Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:34:01 AM AEST
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Very nicely done. This is beaurtiful hun. I think you should tell him, he won't know what he's missing otherwise. Written to perfection dear.

Hugs 'n Love
S'meee
- Becca

Re: Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 03:56:03 PM AEST
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That was great. Your poem read just like a song. Great job!

Re: Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 02:55:32 AM AEST
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wow what a nice poem,,, it was like a song.

Re: Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFaerie on Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 08:19:21 PM AEST
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beautiful write. it has such a wonderful flow about it. i hope he's able to see how you feel. good luck : )

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